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Nightingales Ridge
01:56:59 𔓘 Issy
Spicey pattern if you ask me.
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:52 S҉ Sem
Okay, this dam/foal combo is lovely
-HEE Click-
Murphy's Elites
01:41:40 Fawn
I do that as well. Lock my card and put all my money into a savings account that I have to transfer the funds to my card to use
HermitAcres
01:39:53 Hermit
I also keep my huge funds into a separate account where you manually have to transfer funds over so nobody can just take my card info and spend 5k
HermitAcres
01:38:31 Hermit
Yeah fawn someone scanned my card from one of those skimmers they decided to use my card to make payments on a Prada purse. They almost got away with it too since I was making big purchases to fix up my car. Let the bank know when I seen my bank app. Luckily I got my $500 back
Wolf Dancer
01:04:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Yea that is nice I'll have to look into that once I get a phone since that would be nice to not have to worry about
Irish Fields
01:03:11 Fawn
It's a really nice feature because even if someone steals your card they can't use it
Wolf Dancer
01:02:21 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Ohh interesting! I don't have a phone currently but if I get one I'll do that, I didn't realize that was a option!
Wolfs Ire
01:01:25 Fawn
Download your banks app on your phone. You can then log into your account and lock/unlock your card at anytime. It swaps in less than 30 seconds
Wolf Dancer
01:00:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn how do you lock the card? Does it take a while to unlock? Also my card was a debit card they used so there's that as well
All Breeds
12:59:30 Fawn
I have a habit of locking my card 24/7 unless I'm actively about to use it. I've had my money stolen to many times
Wolf Dancer
12:57:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Ooof that's rough >.>
Wolf Dancer
12:57:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Somehow they didn't take the actual pair of spikes I had in the back though so I'm confused >.> They also left a trail of my items down my road and then we found the CD case they took from my parents cars at a random mailbox on the other side of town since someone in Facebook posted finding the CD binder >.> then they made it two small towns later to fill up their tank with gas >.>
All Breeds
12:57:19 Fawn
Oof I'm sorry it happened though. My aunt left her work laptop in her car one time and someone broke n and stole it x.x She almost got fired but thankfully there wasn't anything of value on it
Wolf Dancer
12:55:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
It was the one night I didn't bring everything in since I got home late from a track meet 😭
All Breeds
12:55:21 Fawn
I leave nothing in my car except an empty water bottle xD
Wolf Dancer
12:52:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)
They took my autographed track bag a pair of shoes my necklace (the first time I took it off to put in that bag as well) and some other odds and ends >.>
Wolf Dancer
12:50:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night nope got about $250 worth of stuff then another $80 on my debit card/wallet it was right in front of my house and we have the videos too, but it's crazy that it happened since we live in the country and lot's of people have guns >.>
Judgement Hall
12:49:46 Night
Good grief, it seems we're all in the trenches tonight. Sorry to hear about that, Wolf. I hope whoever did it left with nothing and it was a wasted effort breaking into your car
Wolf Dancer
12:48:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)
My car got broken into >.>

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Nightingales Ridge
01:56:59 𔓘 Issy
Spicey pattern if you ask me.
Siren Sound Estates
01:51:52 S҉ Sem
Okay, this dam/foal combo is lovely
-HEE Click-
Murphy's Elites
01:41:40 Fawn
I do that as well. Lock my card and put all my money into a savings account that I have to transfer the funds to my card to use
HermitAcres
01:39:53 Hermit
I also keep my huge funds into a separate account where you manually have to transfer funds over so nobody can just take my card info and spend 5k
HermitAcres
01:38:31 Hermit
Yeah fawn someone scanned my card from one of those skimmers they decided to use my card to make payments on a Prada purse. They almost got away with it too since I was making big purchases to fix up my car. Let the bank know when I seen my bank app. Luckily I got my $500 back
Wolf Dancer
01:04:45 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Yea that is nice I'll have to look into that once I get a phone since that would be nice to not have to worry about
Irish Fields
01:03:11 Fawn
It's a really nice feature because even if someone steals your card they can't use it
Wolf Dancer
01:02:21 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Ohh interesting! I don't have a phone currently but if I get one I'll do that, I didn't realize that was a option!
Wolfs Ire
01:01:25 Fawn
Download your banks app on your phone. You can then log into your account and lock/unlock your card at anytime. It swaps in less than 30 seconds
Wolf Dancer
01:00:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn how do you lock the card? Does it take a while to unlock? Also my card was a debit card they used so there's that as well
All Breeds
12:59:30 Fawn
I have a habit of locking my card 24/7 unless I'm actively about to use it. I've had my money stolen to many times
Wolf Dancer
12:57:35 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
Ooof that's rough >.>
Wolf Dancer
12:57:20 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Somehow they didn't take the actual pair of spikes I had in the back though so I'm confused >.> They also left a trail of my items down my road and then we found the CD case they took from my parents cars at a random mailbox on the other side of town since someone in Facebook posted finding the CD binder >.> then they made it two small towns later to fill up their tank with gas >.>
All Breeds
12:57:19 Fawn
Oof I'm sorry it happened though. My aunt left her work laptop in her car one time and someone broke n and stole it x.x She almost got fired but thankfully there wasn't anything of value on it
Wolf Dancer
12:55:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Fawn
It was the one night I didn't bring everything in since I got home late from a track meet 😭
All Breeds
12:55:21 Fawn
I leave nothing in my car except an empty water bottle xD
Wolf Dancer
12:52:57 Wolf Burger (Leg)
They took my autographed track bag a pair of shoes my necklace (the first time I took it off to put in that bag as well) and some other odds and ends >.>
Wolf Dancer
12:50:53 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Night nope got about $250 worth of stuff then another $80 on my debit card/wallet it was right in front of my house and we have the videos too, but it's crazy that it happened since we live in the country and lot's of people have guns >.>
Judgement Hall
12:49:46 Night
Good grief, it seems we're all in the trenches tonight. Sorry to hear about that, Wolf. I hope whoever did it left with nothing and it was a wasted effort breaking into your car
Wolf Dancer
12:48:29 Wolf Burger (Leg)
My car got broken into >.>

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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 06:13 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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I did this earlier in the year and I think I want to do it again. I want you guys to be as constructive with your critiques as you can be, last time you guys were really good and I got some really good pointers and ways to improve along with what I seemed to struggle with *cough* lighting *cough*. Rip these pieces to shreds and let me know what I could do better!
These are my most recent pieces that I can show
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Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:19 PM


Chidori
 
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There's not much I can find wrong with these they are beautiful! But if you want me to be picky here's what I noticed:
On the second picture the front left sock of the mare is inconsistent with the other 3 socks. I would brighten that one up to match the lighting of the other ones. Or you could darken the back left leg to match the front.
The third picture looks a little jagged on the back of the horse. You can try softening your eraser brush just a tad bit so your lines arent so harsh. This will also help your lines look more fluid and natural.
The last picture is amazing but it looks like his legs are cut off to me. Something that will help him look more like he's standing in tall grass is to take your eraser brush and make grass blade strokes on his legs to let the background show through.
These are all very small details and your art is very impressive! Keep up the good work!

Edited at September 26, 2021 10:23 PM by Chidori
Critiques Needed | Tasi September 26, 2021 10:30 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Thank you so much Chidori!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 1, 2021 08:46 AM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking!!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:51 AM


Riverbreeze Stables
 
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So, I had to really look over the images, for a very long time. They are beautiful! And I am an absolute fan of your fourth image, the colour, lighting and shading are absolutely gorgeous. It is also difficult to find things to fix since art is very objective and you are talented.

Now, other than what Chidori has mentioned. Some critiques, or more like tips you can take to your new works.
- Your images are very heavily contrasted, especially the third one. It hides a lot of details that could add to your image, like colour, texture, or shading. I think that's your technique, which looks cool and not really a thing to "fix". But to try something new, you could try something less stark. Like a bright/softer image to test your abilities?
- The first image looks like it's missing a back leg. Not sure if that's the stock or not, but I noticed it and it did make the image look a little off.
- The wings on your second image could be a little more detailed at the joint, and they sort of look like they sit on the withers (unless that's the purpose and I missed it). Nothing too noticeable, but adding in feathers growing to the horse's shoulder, or defining the muscles of the wing attached to the shoulders just add that little extra detail that's nice.

That's about all I see, your work is truly amazing and always nice to see.

Edited at October 2, 2021 03:56 AM by Riverbreeze Stables
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 2, 2021 03:36 PM


Spirtasi Whims
 
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Still looking for more critiques anything that hasn't been said before would be awesome!
Critiques Needed | Tasi October 8, 2021 09:37 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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I would say the hair could be a bit thicker and fuller:] really just me nit-picking but I love the theme of these and I feel like the top and second one the horses don't quite match the background color wise so maybe try playing with that a little bit more
The last one I have almost no critique other than the shadow could have been a tad darker and the third one Is just stunning with the smooth skin and shading but I do feel like all together your pieces could benefit from some more small details like some accessories or some things that match the theme of the piece as a whole
Edit: I do also notice this quote frequently with your art that your horses cut out is fairly rough and sometimes has a few places where it still has some background

Edited at October 8, 2021 09:42 AM by Wings Of Glory

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