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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 200 Season: Fall

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Morning Drizzle, but Clearing later

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Mon 09:17am

Stables Online: 125

LBKL

09:16:28

Oo, All up!
-HEE Click-

Stone Haven Farm

09:09:44 Court

-HEE Click- all up :o

Triple Blue Stables

09:05:06 JJ/TBS/Blue

Thank you Anna :)

Orussid

09:02:37

-HEE Click- ?? how

Red Hill Hollow

09:02:30 Red, Hollow

-HEE Click-
A perfect week 4 😌

Ravenclaw Livery

09:01:33 Zen's WBs

Oooh potential apricot producer 👀 -HEE Click-

09:01:24 Anna/Jewel

Lightning (the mark on her face looks like it)

Triple Blue Stables

09:00:25 JJ/TBS/Blue

Good day all.
Please help me name her?

-HEE Click-

09:00:10 Void Malign

working Sundays is always fun. My brain now thinks it's Tuesday

08:58:49 Echo <3

Oo apricot and dun 👀
-HEE Click-

Nice little addition to my dun project lol

Shamrock Equines

08:53:17 Crowley

I need anti frame spray.

08:49:48 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
pretty lil gal

08:43:08 Anna/Jewel

Awww oh no so sorry!

Shamrock Equines

08:42:40 Crowley

He was my soul pet. Had him since he was born. There are pics of him in my bio.

08:42:39 AL, mum to Nemi

Oohh I see, my deepest sympathies :'(

Shamrock Equines

08:41:51 Crowley

We think it was something neurological. He went fast.

08:41:34 Anna/Jewel

Excuse, me, but um whos Tim?

08:40:27 AL, mum to Nemi

Oh god no :(
What happened to him?
I am so sorry to hear that

Shamrock Equines

08:39:48 Crowley

Ceci
I buried Tim yesterday.

08:38:18 AL, mum to Nemi

Aw Myth, whats wrong if you dont mind me asking? In any event I hope you feel better soon

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LBKL

09:16:28

Oo, All up!
-HEE Click-

Stone Haven Farm

09:09:44 Court

-HEE Click- all up :o

Triple Blue Stables

09:05:06 JJ/TBS/Blue

Thank you Anna :)

Orussid

09:02:37

-HEE Click- ?? how

Red Hill Hollow

09:02:30 Red, Hollow

-HEE Click-
A perfect week 4 😌

Ravenclaw Livery

09:01:33 Zen's WBs

Oooh potential apricot producer 👀 -HEE Click-

09:01:24 Anna/Jewel

Lightning (the mark on her face looks like it)

Triple Blue Stables

09:00:25 JJ/TBS/Blue

Good day all.
Please help me name her?

-HEE Click-

09:00:10 Void Malign

working Sundays is always fun. My brain now thinks it's Tuesday

08:58:49 Echo <3

Oo apricot and dun 👀
-HEE Click-

Nice little addition to my dun project lol

Shamrock Equines

08:53:17 Crowley

I need anti frame spray.

08:49:48 Anna/Jewel

-HEE Click-
pretty lil gal

08:43:08 Anna/Jewel

Awww oh no so sorry!

Shamrock Equines

08:42:40 Crowley

He was my soul pet. Had him since he was born. There are pics of him in my bio.

08:42:39 AL, mum to Nemi

Oohh I see, my deepest sympathies :'(

Shamrock Equines

08:41:51 Crowley

We think it was something neurological. He went fast.

08:41:34 Anna/Jewel

Excuse, me, but um whos Tim?

08:40:27 AL, mum to Nemi

Oh god no :(
What happened to him?
I am so sorry to hear that

Shamrock Equines

08:39:48 Crowley

Ceci
I buried Tim yesterday.

08:38:18 AL, mum to Nemi

Aw Myth, whats wrong if you dont mind me asking? In any event I hope you feel better soon

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April 9, 2021 04:16 PM

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Tips so far? Don't be afraid to be harsh, but take into account this is a HUGE work in progress.

April 9, 2021 08:47 PM

Blue Moon Breeding

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The stock matches well. I think you should work on making the horse 'smoother', it looks like when you cut it out you made a few jagged lines. The horses face blends in with the background, making it look like it is cut off. The hooves are very jagged and not the correct shape. It looks great so far!

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