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Dimmed
01:45:24 Dimmy
Oh my goodness I didn't realize how naked your stable was there lol yes I'll do that later if u remember
Equile
01:45:09 Tosk's RID
She was the start to my Tobi line ;D totally deserving
Equile
01:44:37 Tosk's RID
Oh heck yes!
Dimmed
01:44:22 Dimmy
Tosk I can probably make you a stable set if you want with it
Stabulum Equorum
01:43:38 
Jerii, lookie what i found <.<
-Click-
Dimmed
01:43:10 Dimmy
I don't know what is causing them to not open right. I've had issues with it lately when I post on my phone
Stabulum Equorum
01:42:42 
yaaaay, Time to put that in my RID Bio!
Dimmed
01:42:15 Dimmy
-Click-
This?
Stabulum Equorum
01:41:32 
it says the image doesn't exist, Dimmeh :C
Dimmed
01:41:31 Dimmy
Ugh yes one moment lol
Pegasus Lane
01:41:19 Peggy (or) Peg
On my end it's saying the image is unavailable, Dimmy 😭😭
Dimmed
01:41:06 Dimmy
Sorry I'm on my phone so can't see sizes but it might need resized
Stabulum Equorum
01:41:00 
OH, Jeri?
Dimmed
01:40:35 Dimmy
Oops this the horse image
-Click-
Dimmed
01:39:58 Dimmy
-Click-
Stabulum Equorum
01:39:35 
oh hello
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
01:39:17 
it was a bay tobi, right? maybe i can use it on another horse
Dimmed
01:38:58 Dimmy
I do!
Stabulum Equorum
01:38:31 
do you still have the Vitulina art, Dimmeh? It is still one of my favorites
Stabulum Equorum
01:38:15 
I can't imagine how much work that was

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Dimmed
01:45:24 Dimmy
Oh my goodness I didn't realize how naked your stable was there lol yes I'll do that later if u remember
Equile
01:45:09 Tosk's RID
She was the start to my Tobi line ;D totally deserving
Equile
01:44:37 Tosk's RID
Oh heck yes!
Dimmed
01:44:22 Dimmy
Tosk I can probably make you a stable set if you want with it
Stabulum Equorum
01:43:38 
Jerii, lookie what i found <.<
-Click-
Dimmed
01:43:10 Dimmy
I don't know what is causing them to not open right. I've had issues with it lately when I post on my phone
Stabulum Equorum
01:42:42 
yaaaay, Time to put that in my RID Bio!
Dimmed
01:42:15 Dimmy
-Click-
This?
Stabulum Equorum
01:41:32 
it says the image doesn't exist, Dimmeh :C
Dimmed
01:41:31 Dimmy
Ugh yes one moment lol
Pegasus Lane
01:41:19 Peggy (or) Peg
On my end it's saying the image is unavailable, Dimmy 😭😭
Dimmed
01:41:06 Dimmy
Sorry I'm on my phone so can't see sizes but it might need resized
Stabulum Equorum
01:41:00 
OH, Jeri?
Dimmed
01:40:35 Dimmy
Oops this the horse image
-Click-
Dimmed
01:39:58 Dimmy
-Click-
Stabulum Equorum
01:39:35 
oh hello
-HEE Click-
Stabulum Equorum
01:39:17 
it was a bay tobi, right? maybe i can use it on another horse
Dimmed
01:38:58 Dimmy
I do!
Stabulum Equorum
01:38:31 
do you still have the Vitulina art, Dimmeh? It is still one of my favorites
Stabulum Equorum
01:38:15 
I can't imagine how much work that was

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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:12 AM


Cherry River Elites
 
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I need some hard critique on this. Two different wing colors as well, completely insignificant, ignore that. Be as harsh as you need to, I feel like I could improve a lot. This is actually my best art yet, but you're probably super bored with all my rambling on by now, so I'll shut up and let the masters work their critique magic.
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Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 11:19 AM

Former Stable
 
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Honestly the biggest thing for me is just how pixelated it looks, I would try using smaller brush sizes so it doesn't look as blocky. I think you were trying to do a braided mane and tail but the tail is very thin. The pink nose is also darker than it needs to be.
The definition on the chest is great though but I would try and carry that through the rest of the horse more, especially on the dark sections on the legs.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 12:53 PM


Florestä
 
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I think it looks really good. Would definitely buy.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:02 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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i think the definition on the chest is good. but with the legs you need to finish them way more smoothly, makin sure to rub out any bits coming off the legs, and maybe smudge the dark layers on the legs so they blend with the buckskin color of the horse, because at the moment they look very abrupt and not right.
with the hair you attemted to do braids, and honestly you shouldnt have. it looks odd and pixelated, a bit like dreadlocks. i would have done the hair either long, flowy and dark, or short but smooth. the pink snip on the nose is too pink, try softening that.
now with the wings. honestly, they arent that great. along the tops of them need to be more swooshy and curved, more angelic. the tip bits of them look to pixelated an round, like you have just done them with a mouse. try smudging them (use a low strenght smudge) to create a better effect.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:10 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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White Hills- Thanks. I was actually using the smallest brushes possible, because I suck at resizing, so I was using a 500x500 canvas. But I'll definitely work on more definition on the legs.
Sage Brush Stables- I love you <3
Olive Tree Equine- Dang :'). What do you mean by 'bits coming off the legs'? The braids were actually supposed to look like that, but if I were trying to do nicer braids, I'd use a better brush. I also thought the pink looked off- just wasn't sure why. I meant to make the wings look slightly twisted. But I'll definitely use those tips for other wings I make.
Thanks everyone!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:18 PM


Thistleberry Farm
 
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sorry to be so harsh XD i meant for example the front left leg, there are bis where you have repainted it darker where you havent rubbed it all out so there are small pixels coming off the leg in places.
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:22 PM


Cherry River Elites
 
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Ah, I see that now. Thank you!
Looking for heavy critique! February 22, 2021 01:27 PM


TenaciTea
 
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My main thing with this is the wings.
If you look at bird wings, they aren't completely straight.
When I draw wings (that aren't super anatomically correct) I do two gentle curves basically going on the opposite directions.
Ignore that this is a completely different art style than what you're working with xD
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If you look at the wings on this, you see that they're not straight, and it makes the horse look more like it's in motion. If you wanted the wings to look more level to the ground, you could decrease the angle/curve of the wings.
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 01:03 AM


Azrail Elites
 
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What program do you use?
Looking for heavy critique! February 23, 2021 07:55 AM


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