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Greenheart Stables

12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months

Silver Brookside

12:38:22

Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.

Nightingales Ridge

12:36:15 𔓘 Issy

What happened to all your horses?

Nightingales Ridge

12:35:19 𔓘 Issy

Whats that regarding Brook?

Silver Brookside

12:33:34

Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/

Nightingales Ridge

12:28:12 𔓘 Issy

Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too

fire

12:10:13

Ok thanks

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:26 𔓘 Issy

Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes

12:09:25 MOD/Trish

-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting

Nightingales Ridge

12:07:10 𔓘 Issy

Night!

12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Night, ya'll

Eyrie of the Stars

11:45:01 Eyrie

Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.

11:40:08

fire

11:38:08

how do create a forum thread

11:36:56

thank you!! <3

11:36:32

Valdegras
1am

11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Fern?

11:35:10

Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?

Galloping Fields

11:02:19

Fawn she is stunning

Gypsy Family Farm

10:53:19

Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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Greenheart Stables

12:50:32 Gren|Grenlin|Snek

-HEE Click-
Color breeding SDs fear me, got the goal of having more then 4 patterns on my Dressage SDs in less then six months

Silver Brookside

12:38:22

Issy - the Irish capture event. Literally nothing actually useful.

Nightingales Ridge

12:36:15 𔓘 Issy

What happened to all your horses?

Nightingales Ridge

12:35:19 𔓘 Issy

Whats that regarding Brook?

Silver Brookside

12:33:34

Man, I had the worst luck and got nothing useful. :/

Nightingales Ridge

12:28:12 𔓘 Issy

Oh gosh not AGAIN forgetting to enter horses. I entered maybe 1 barn lol oh gosh. Had such a simple quest too

fire

12:10:13

Ok thanks

Nightingales Ridge

12:09:26 𔓘 Issy

Yes Boulder! Yes Yes yes

12:09:25 MOD/Trish

-HEE Click- oh YOURE exciting

Nightingales Ridge

12:07:10 𔓘 Issy

Night!

12:05:35 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Night, ya'll

Eyrie of the Stars

11:45:01 Eyrie

Fire choose the section you want to post in, scroll to the bottom, and there'll be a text box to make one.

11:40:08

fire

11:38:08

how do create a forum thread

11:36:56

thank you!! <3

11:36:32

Valdegras
1am

11:36:06 Bluey/PM abt books^^

Fern?

11:35:10

Dumb question - what time in EST does the server roll over into the next day?

Galloping Fields

11:02:19

Fawn she is stunning

Gypsy Family Farm

10:53:19

Aura, thanks for the horse treat! He really is an old boy!

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May 15, 2020 07:45 PM

Quizzical Quarters

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It's been a while since I've been critiqued, and I think it could do some good right now. So really all I want is critique haha.

May 15, 2020 11:52 PM

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Wow, this is gorgeous! Sorry, I don't have anything to critique. Lol

May 16, 2020 04:50 AM

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The color change turned out great :D Gorgeous work!

I think the horse should cast a harder, longer shadow in the ground, given that the light behind is very strong. Also put harsh yellow light on the side of the mane and tail as well as now they look a bit out of picture due to the lighting.

May 16, 2020 08:07 AM

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Those are some good thoughts!

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