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Mon 08:37am

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Jericho Stables

08:37:10

A little lol

Shamrock Equines

08:36:26 Crowley

Ceci
The fact that I can actually stand to do anything is amazing.

08:35:07 Ivy

hello hello

08:34:34

The amount if www wb colts has been overwhelming Jeri xD does that count?

08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

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Jericho Stables

08:37:10

A little lol

Shamrock Equines

08:36:26 Crowley

Ceci
The fact that I can actually stand to do anything is amazing.

08:35:07 Ivy

hello hello

08:34:34

The amount if www wb colts has been overwhelming Jeri xD does that count?

08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

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October 16, 2019 08:45 PM

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I'm not done yet, but any thoughts, advice, critiques, whatever on this?

https://i.postimg.cc/xjFcGg7c/sketch1571276177472.png

Edited at October 16, 2019 08:46 PM by Ankou

October 16, 2019 08:50 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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It looks really nice so far!

I love your muscle structuring in the shoulder.

My only critiques would be the neck ties in very high it should ideally connect right above the middle line in the breast area. And the head and neck look significantly too small for the rest of the body.

But accurate proportions will come with practice. :)

October 16, 2019 09:01 PM

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Thanks so much for your help! I seriously think I have a HUGE problem with the head and neck compared to the body. At least now I have a new area to focus on next time I draw. :)

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