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08:35:07 Ivy

hello hello

08:34:34

The amount if www wb colts has been overwhelming Jeri xD does that count?

08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

08:21:22

SD hate or love you. In my case they hate me.

08:20:59 AL, mum to Nemi

Why does my SD suck...? Is it because my wubs has stolen my heart on this account?

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08:35:07 Ivy

hello hello

08:34:34

The amount if www wb colts has been overwhelming Jeri xD does that count?

08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

08:21:22

SD hate or love you. In my case they hate me.

08:20:59 AL, mum to Nemi

Why does my SD suck...? Is it because my wubs has stolen my heart on this account?

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Pricing + Critique Needed.

October 14, 2019 11:02 PM

Snowmass Horses

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I would like some critiques on my art and prices, as i think i have gotten pretty well with doing it for the past months. :3

https://i.postimg.cc/0jwX2103/Untitled110.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/7Yxs4FPd/Untitled93-0.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/RhF2bCpk/Commission-14.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/MGM8nVL4/Commission-8.jpg

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https://i.postimg.cc/ZnSxmbNF/Commission-19.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/3xfBnVyX/Untitled78-20190915201600.png

https://i.postimg.cc/qvFsGmHB/Anime-Acres-Banner.jpg

Edited at October 14, 2019 11:03 PM by Snowmass Horses

Pricing + Critique Needed.

October 15, 2019 06:22 PM

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I'm bad with exact pricing, but I would say you could hop on into high tier two with those pieces!

That aside, the only critiques that I have are that the mane + tail on the first one looks like it is done with a round non-pressure-sensitive brush, therefor it looks a bit rough and doesn't flow. It looks like you fixed it throughout the next several pieces.

Next thing is that the highlights look a bit dull. This is probably because you were using a pure white color with low opacity. For highlights I use either a pastel blue or pastel yellow color (depends if your lighting is warm or cool.) Very small brush size. 1-2 px on a pressure sensitive hard brush. After those each have their own layer, set the whole layer to overlay and mess with the opacity. Do this highlighting process for the horse and hair, but you really only need to do parts that you want to draw attention to (as well as anywhere sun hits the horse.) Don't over highlight! Applying these techniques will make the image crisper and less flat.

I reference Manduh's youtube a bunch for my art, this time stamp might help you with highlighting. It helped me tremendously.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9xltza9Ojtw&t=551s

Time stamp:

32:36

Edited at October 15, 2019 06:32 PM by Trillium Acres

Pricing + Critique Needed.

October 15, 2019 10:13 PM

Snowmass Horses

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Thanks, Trill, very helpful! :3

Pricing + Critique Needed.

October 15, 2019 10:58 PM

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Snowmass Horses said:
Thanks, Trill, very helpful! :3

No problem ;D

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