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08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

08:21:22

SD hate or love you. In my case they hate me.

08:20:59 AL, mum to Nemi

Why does my SD suck...? Is it because my wubs has stolen my heart on this account?

Jericho Stables

08:20:26

No... it's not lol. That's the wrong horse. Her week 10 was 333334

08:20:07 AL, mum to Nemi

That I can agree with you :)

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08:34:14 AL, mum to Nemi

Myth, something similar

08:32:47 Zen

So glad she survived the wild bay breed up. A+, prl, Ch, Spl, and is a shortie -HEE Click-

Jericho Stables

08:31:42

That... is not a great defense lmfao

Shamrock Equines

08:31:40 Crowley

Ceci
Alive. Breathing. You?

08:30:03

In my defense... I didn't even know he exited until Hem told me he isn't trained xD

Gemstone Stable

08:29:43 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Yup. Pretty is as pretty does, most of the time.

08:29:29 AL, mum to Nemi

Hi Myth, how are you?

Shamrock Equines

08:28:31 Crowley

Gem
Sadly he had to lose his balls.

Gemstone Stable

08:27:56 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Only one? And what nice genes too. :(

Jericho Stables

08:27:39

And you haven't even trained him. -Click-

Shamrock Equines

08:27:15 Crowley

Darn
-HEE Click-

08:25:09

Hem just kindly reminded me that I had another www colt hiding in my barn 🫠
Where did he even come from

-HEE Click-

08:24:57 Raven

-HEE Click-
Matching you will be a task, I can feel it -_-

Shamrock Equines

08:24:16 Crowley

Hi Ceci

08:22:37 AL, mum to Nemi

-HEE Click-

Oh hello?

08:22:05 AL, mum to Nemi

I mostly try to get more apricots, whites and greys which might trash the training

08:21:22

SD hate or love you. In my case they hate me.

08:20:59 AL, mum to Nemi

Why does my SD suck...? Is it because my wubs has stolen my heart on this account?

Jericho Stables

08:20:26

No... it's not lol. That's the wrong horse. Her week 10 was 333334

08:20:07 AL, mum to Nemi

That I can agree with you :)

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Critique Me Please!

October 9, 2019 02:27 PM

Posts: 3730
#462828
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=19625028

I did this pretty girl's art this morning and I tried a new prep and hair technique so I'd love some help on what I can improve on. Be as harsh as needed! I want to improve!

Also, I am not selling this piece, but I'd love to know how much it'd be worth if I did. Thanks!

Edit: Here's another piece I did today, and I'm actually quite proud of it :D

https://i.postimg.cc/7Pmv4YQ6/Untitled83-2.jpg

Edited at October 9, 2019 09:04 PM by BreezieM30w RIDs

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:50 PM

Posts: 0
#463393
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You should be proud!especially the second,the lighting is very pretty

Just depth in the hair,highlights,shadows ect instead of being one block colour

A user called rhiaan on DA has nice turourials (she's amazing btw check her out)

Critique Me Please!

October 10, 2019 03:56 PM

Posts: 4637
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For #1, I would suggest for you to make the hair flow more smoothly, instead of being as strait. For #2, I would try to get rid of the glow around the horse, unless that was the ghost theme you were going for. Overall, really great! I Love the lighting and colours! These are amazing!

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