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Irish Fields
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Ooooooh
Pon Brats
07:02:33 
Speaking of which, Fawns, do you want to try your luck on shiny pons?

-HEE Click-
She has no date yet.
Pon Brats
07:01:32 
Let's see if Granola matches her
Irish Fields
07:00:57 Fawn
Well fuck a duck then 💀
Pon Brats
07:00:27 
That would be my side account, Fawns xD
Irish Fields
06:59:39 Fawn
Find a short shiny boy xD
Pon Brats
06:59:31 
Oh wait.. I am already sending her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-


Shine it is
Pon Brats
06:59:05 
But Pon 🥹
Irish Fields
06:58:42 Fawn
Go for shine
Pon Brats
06:58:08 
Should I risk it and send her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Or go for shine?
astral_angel
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ohh my bad sorry!
Irish Fields
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Irish Fields
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Please don't use chat speak :)
astral_angel
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im good! ngl its a bit confusing but ill figure it out eventually!
Tamarack Mountain
06:52:31 Opal
Hello astral
All Breeds
06:52:08 Fawn
Morning Astral, I'm doing well. How are you?
All Breeds
06:51:46 Fawn
Oh dear Tosk xD
astral_angel
06:50:59 
hiiii!!! im neww how is everyonee?
Toskana
06:50:36 ♞ Tosk
Time to do that walk of shame into shamrock's inbox.
Toskana
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And of course.. i forgot to buy an Abu straw for a second Unhinged embyo x.x

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Irish Fields
07:03:15 Fawn
Ooooooh
Pon Brats
07:02:33 
Speaking of which, Fawns, do you want to try your luck on shiny pons?

-HEE Click-
She has no date yet.
Pon Brats
07:01:32 
Let's see if Granola matches her
Irish Fields
07:00:57 Fawn
Well fuck a duck then 💀
Pon Brats
07:00:27 
That would be my side account, Fawns xD
Irish Fields
06:59:39 Fawn
Find a short shiny boy xD
Pon Brats
06:59:31 
Oh wait.. I am already sending her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-


Shine it is
Pon Brats
06:59:05 
But Pon 🥹
Irish Fields
06:58:42 Fawn
Go for shine
Pon Brats
06:58:08 
Should I risk it and send her to dodgy..
-HEE Click-

Or go for shine?
astral_angel
06:56:09 
ohh my bad sorry!
Irish Fields
06:55:41 Fawn
The only chat speak you can use is OMG, OML, LOL, LMAO, and IRL
Irish Fields
06:54:48 Fawn
Please don't use chat speak :)
astral_angel
06:53:59 
im good! ngl its a bit confusing but ill figure it out eventually!
Tamarack Mountain
06:52:31 Opal
Hello astral
All Breeds
06:52:08 Fawn
Morning Astral, I'm doing well. How are you?
All Breeds
06:51:46 Fawn
Oh dear Tosk xD
astral_angel
06:50:59 
hiiii!!! im neww how is everyonee?
Toskana
06:50:36 ♞ Tosk
Time to do that walk of shame into shamrock's inbox.
Toskana
06:47:57 ♞ Tosk
And of course.. i forgot to buy an Abu straw for a second Unhinged embyo x.x

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Critique? September 19, 2019 02:46 PM


Diamanté
 
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So... I recently started using GIMP in addition to my usually art process. What do y'all think? Is there anything that jumps out at you as something I could do better?

https://i.postimg.cc/Hk3XmFtS/ISA-fin.jpg
Critique? September 19, 2019 04:59 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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I love that piece, I think the Bridle is too bright/glowy.
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:46 PM


LostCause
 
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Pretty!

I love a good backlight glow on a horse, but it may be too bright/needs to fade out a little more to make it appear more blended.

If possible, maybe a little bit different blend on that ground hoof; it looks like the hoof just poofed below the coronet band.

I agree with Raindrop, the bridle is a bit too bright. I had difficulty deciphering that it was a bridle due to the head angle, so perhaps some sort of defined lines are needed.

Edited at September 19, 2019 05:48 PM by LostCause
Critique? September 19, 2019 05:54 PM


WildWillow
 
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I personally think the horse is too bright in places for the background. Either lighten the background or darken the horse. If you are really wanting a glow behind the horse, lower the opacity. The glow, when it is that bright and that solid, looks odd since there is no obvious light source. I would also add a few more highlights onto the horse and the mane and tail. The horse looks quite dull when it has the glow behind it.
I would also edit out the bridle or lower the brightness. It took me a few seconds and a zoom in to actually realize that it was a bridle.
The edges of the horse also looks quite blurry. I would sharpen the horse up a bit. I would also sharpen the background. When I zoom in on the footing of the horse, the "front" of the background is just as blurry as the "back" of the background. Because of this reason, the splash on the footing looks too sharp and out of place compared to the rest of the background. I would sharpen the front of the background and slightly blur the splash to get them to match.
I hope this makes sense. :) If you need clarification - feel free to mail me. I can be a bit confusing at times lol!

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