Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


Year: 193   Season: Spring   
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Red Horizon Ranch
08:37:30 Red
Anna I usually skip that one but I actually did it for the first time this past capture day
Shamrock Equines
08:37:03 Crowley
Hey Toto!

Gem
Fine currently not with sick yorkie but mom said she is ok.
Minerva
08:36:54 Min
Red depends on where they are in the training "cycle". Best to enter ones that have just levelled i assume. I only enter feds with my SD futurities which are level 1 W geldings and they dont level in a month except the odd time theres 6 training weeks
CWY country
08:36:41 C
My top three best rated foals this month, and all fillies.
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:35:29 Anna/Jewel
I'm loosing hope of ever completing this quest. "Capture a triple superb bay horse" It is worth 15k and all the horses i have caught are anything BUT bays
Snow Stable
08:32:36 Snow❆Gem
@ven

Neato!

@myth

Hello. I'm acheing on my left half today... O.o How are you and the sick yorkie?
WhizBar Eventing
08:32:12 Toto
So pretty ven <3
Red Horizon Ranch
08:31:56 Red
Any federation people on? I’ve officially decided to try them this year. It’s best to enter my PPP geldings right? I feel like EEE would level up too fast
Stormsong Manor
08:31:30 Ven
He got prl and homo PATN-2. I am so happy.
Hy Brasil
08:31:18 Croft
nice -HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:30:08 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

I got a pretty cool Sootie tho
Minerva
08:30:05 Min
Ayy Ven must be fate!
Shamrock Equines
08:29:54 Crowley
Hey Gem
Sweet Valley
08:29:13 Anna/Jewel
@ Issy- good for you! The highest rating I got is EEE...😥
Stormsong Manor
08:28:30 Ven
My first WWW here born with the sooty I painted for the game <3

-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:28:13 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

In 3 game-time years I guess she can be a real good breeder
Snow Stable
08:25:55 Snow❆Gem
@issy

Yes! XD And you got your first EWE, nice!
Amethyst Ranch
08:25:25 Echo <3
Thank you Anna and Loony <3
Nightingales Ridge
08:24:06 Issy
Gem ...Wow he's like a pink copper
Snow Stable
08:23:11 Snow❆Gem
Blue-eyed apricot splash sabino TB is pretty! XD

-HEE Click- PPS but keeping for his pinkish coat! XD

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Red Horizon Ranch
08:37:30 Red
Anna I usually skip that one but I actually did it for the first time this past capture day
Shamrock Equines
08:37:03 Crowley
Hey Toto!

Gem
Fine currently not with sick yorkie but mom said she is ok.
Minerva
08:36:54 Min
Red depends on where they are in the training "cycle". Best to enter ones that have just levelled i assume. I only enter feds with my SD futurities which are level 1 W geldings and they dont level in a month except the odd time theres 6 training weeks
CWY country
08:36:41 C
My top three best rated foals this month, and all fillies.
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:35:29 Anna/Jewel
I'm loosing hope of ever completing this quest. "Capture a triple superb bay horse" It is worth 15k and all the horses i have caught are anything BUT bays
Snow Stable
08:32:36 Snow❆Gem
@ven

Neato!

@myth

Hello. I'm acheing on my left half today... O.o How are you and the sick yorkie?
WhizBar Eventing
08:32:12 Toto
So pretty ven <3
Red Horizon Ranch
08:31:56 Red
Any federation people on? I’ve officially decided to try them this year. It’s best to enter my PPP geldings right? I feel like EEE would level up too fast
Stormsong Manor
08:31:30 Ven
He got prl and homo PATN-2. I am so happy.
Hy Brasil
08:31:18 Croft
nice -HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:30:08 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

I got a pretty cool Sootie tho
Minerva
08:30:05 Min
Ayy Ven must be fate!
Shamrock Equines
08:29:54 Crowley
Hey Gem
Sweet Valley
08:29:13 Anna/Jewel
@ Issy- good for you! The highest rating I got is EEE...😥
Stormsong Manor
08:28:30 Ven
My first WWW here born with the sooty I painted for the game <3

-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
08:28:13 Anna/Jewel
-HEE Click-

In 3 game-time years I guess she can be a real good breeder
Snow Stable
08:25:55 Snow❆Gem
@issy

Yes! XD And you got your first EWE, nice!
Amethyst Ranch
08:25:25 Echo <3
Thank you Anna and Loony <3
Nightingales Ridge
08:24:06 Issy
Gem ...Wow he's like a pink copper
Snow Stable
08:23:11 Snow❆Gem
Blue-eyed apricot splash sabino TB is pretty! XD

-HEE Click- PPS but keeping for his pinkish coat! XD

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Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 01:43 PM


Toxic Carnage
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ5pddQh/Untitled4-1.jpg

This is my latest piece. Tell me what you think how much it could go for and what I can do better please ^^
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 14, 2019 02:41 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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This looks very nice. But this is not a Palomino, and in fact a champagne. You can tell by the pink muzzle. :)

I think you did an awesome job on the cut out as well as the pose placement and proportion to the background.
The tail looks really nice as well.

A few things stick out to me as places that could use some improvement. First being the mane.
The top looks really nice, but the bottom is kind of blunt. Like someone just cut it with scissors.
In order to correct this, i would draw on some more flyaways / wisps at the bottom to give the mane a more natural appearance.

The second thing i think could use some adjustment is the ground connection. The area where the horse is placed would be a hard wet sand. Yet the feet just kind of disappear. In this situation the feet wouldn't sink in very much and should be mostly visible. I dont think you can correct that in this piece, as youve already erased a good portion.

Next would be a shadow. Even in dim lighting, a shadow is always cast. There are very few instances where a shadow isn't present.

I think if you start by studying and correcting this few fundamental things, your art will really take a step into the next level and you can start focusing on learning lighting. :)

Good luck!
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 15, 2019 08:14 PM


Chidori
 
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These videos made by Amanda can help :)

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCBja60SdRTmGBaypsBgyowg
Sunset Palimino Criticism welcome September 16, 2019 06:25 AM


Toxic Carnage
 
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Thanks guys! Im always looking for where I can improve ^^

Edited at September 16, 2019 06:25 AM by AnimeAcres

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