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Fluffy's Cosy Home
06:45:34 Fluffy
Auction:
*Manchado
*World class
*Peacock
*EEE
*PEE
*Colour
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
The Lazy Ninja
05:41:43 Jessie
PWW pony mare 15k
-HEE Click-
Portrait Paints Stud
05:19:47 Dulcie Is Painting
Foal auction
Great for FR sacrifices or color collections
-HEE Click-
fire
04:32:11 
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were about to start a contest next week
so pls join we need 20 mebers to play the game/ contest
HermitAcres
04:13:20 Hermit
-HEE Click-
WWW LpLp mares for embryos yr 201
-HEE Click-
#41 yearly WWW producer straw thread for yr 201!
QualitySH
04:09:28 
-HEE Click- WWW stallion only 250k!
Campbell Stud
04:06:51 
-HEE Click-
EEE-S RID mare.
maggiemay9210
03:12:59 Maggie
Rare coat colors sd dressage auction
-HEE Click-
Partizanskaya
02:22:19 Kaya
WWW SHLB/ABLB mares embryo auction.

SB is 50k & 75k
-HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
12:49:35 ISO Brave EWW ISH
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EEE gelding for sale!

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Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:26 PM

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https://i.postimg.cc/pT0bBfVZ/Untitled229-1.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/wTVYD0YS/Untitled230-1.jpg

Thoughts? Critiques? I've been practicing.

If I were to reopen my shop (should I?) What tier should I be in? What would be fair prices?

Edit: some credits

Edited at September 15, 2019 01:28 PM by Golden Meadows
Art Critique September 14, 2019 12:51 PM

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I love it
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:23 PM

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I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:26 PM

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Raven Hollow Elite said:
I vote it !very pretty maybe try adding markings next time,adventure into new things!


I leave my pieces bare so the auction winner can have them added ;)
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:33 PM


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I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.

Edited at September 14, 2019 01:35 PM by Squeeing Onion RIDs
Art Critique September 14, 2019 01:38 PM

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Squeeing Onion RIDs said:
I would still pop the credits on there, since you technically have published the image ;)

Not hard to just pop them on and then hide the layer while you're actually working.

Critique time!
The horse's lighting is a good foundation - adding a touch of light to the shoulder/withers may help give the horse some definition, and fit with how bright that highlighting is on its back. (Right now, the horse seems just a little out of whack with the backgrounds lighting)

The composition is alright, and I enjoy how you have placed the horse to be crossing the stream.

With that though - Might want to add some splashes! :D If you're not confident on drawing them, there are DA stock artists who provide pre-cut splash effects you could put to good use here. Really add some motion and cement the horse in the background realistically.

The mane and tail are nice! They fit well with the smoothed style you chose for the horse.

Lighting: The color of the horses lighting is on-par with the background :D



EDIT: Unsure if they were added while I was writing or if I just missed them.. but the credits are really hard to read with the font you chose. I'd either brighten them so they are more easily legible, or pick a different font.



If you zoom in, I painted splishes on the feet ;)

Thanks :DD. I'll brightest the credits :D
Art Critique September 15, 2019 01:28 PM

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Should I reopen my art shop? If so, what would be fair prices and what tier would I be in?
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:10 PM

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I would say Tier 1 at 30-45k would be okay.
Art Critique September 15, 2019 03:20 PM

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https://horseeden.com/forums.php?f=57&t=31246

How's that pricing?

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