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Equile

05:52:24 Tosk's RID

time for these suckers ._.

Seagrape Stables

05:50:30 Secret Capp

05:49:15

Ohh
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

05:47:42 Ash

Haha Maco, least they make up for it in other areas 🤭

05:47:06 Maco

@ Ash
-HEE Click- I think the same of her lol

05:46:40 Detroit

Myth
Im happy to take him lol

05:46:39 Colorful Capp

-HEE Click- not mad at that!

Lytaa

05:46:05 Honey

-HEE Click-
I'll take that

05:45:52 Tim:2016-2026

Well you ain't sticking around much longer.
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

05:44:36 Ash

This training makes me laugh, can only assume she moves like a camel: -HEE Click-

05:42:17 ♘Tosk

i mean <_< heck yes.

05:41:57 ♘Tosk

hhuh???
-HEE Click-

Lunoa

05:41:49 Honey

-HEE Click-
Is it bad that I want to send her to her dad next month? xD gonna end up with RnRn though

05:40:21 ♘Tosk

Welp. Could be worse
-HEE Click-

Tiluu

05:39:30 Honey

Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!

Tiluu

05:39:11 Honey

Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him

Windy Hollow Farms

05:37:58 Windy

wow Capp that splash filly!

05:37:05

also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D

05:36:47

This one, Honey
-HEE Click-

Tiluu

05:36:13 Honey

No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD

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Equile

05:52:24 Tosk's RID

time for these suckers ._.

Seagrape Stables

05:50:30 Secret Capp

05:49:15

Ohh
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

05:47:42 Ash

Haha Maco, least they make up for it in other areas 🤭

05:47:06 Maco

@ Ash
-HEE Click- I think the same of her lol

05:46:40 Detroit

Myth
Im happy to take him lol

05:46:39 Colorful Capp

-HEE Click- not mad at that!

Lytaa

05:46:05 Honey

-HEE Click-
I'll take that

05:45:52 Tim:2016-2026

Well you ain't sticking around much longer.
-HEE Click-

Ashcroft Park Stud

05:44:36 Ash

This training makes me laugh, can only assume she moves like a camel: -HEE Click-

05:42:17 ♘Tosk

i mean <_< heck yes.

05:41:57 ♘Tosk

hhuh???
-HEE Click-

Lunoa

05:41:49 Honey

-HEE Click-
Is it bad that I want to send her to her dad next month? xD gonna end up with RnRn though

05:40:21 ♘Tosk

Welp. Could be worse
-HEE Click-

Tiluu

05:39:30 Honey

Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!

Tiluu

05:39:11 Honey

Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him

Windy Hollow Farms

05:37:58 Windy

wow Capp that splash filly!

05:37:05

also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D

05:36:47

This one, Honey
-HEE Click-

Tiluu

05:36:13 Honey

No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD

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Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 10:53 AM

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So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737</a>

(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613</a>

<a href="https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034">https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034</a>

(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

Critique Please!

September 8, 2019 12:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Red Dragon said:
So for fun I decided to do a lineart peice rather than a manip, and found I waaaaay prefered it! So I'm looking for any critique or help on how to improve! Pieces are listed oldest to newest.
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20230737
(I know the floor is horrible on this one, it was my first lineart)
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=20250613
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17609034
(Background was sooooo hard to do on this one, I tried to make it a circle lense type deal)

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