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Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci

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Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
😂 I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg 😂
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci

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I'd Love Critiques Please August 31, 2019 08:43 PM


Bridle Rock
 
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https://i.postimg.cc/PJ9LwrWD/Untitled40-1.jpg

Be as harsh as needed, as I'd love to improve any way that I can. Dark pieces aren't my strong suit, but I'm fairly proud of this one. He started out as a chestnut, so yeah...
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Former Stable
 
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I think it's really good!
What program do you use?
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Thanks!
Ibis Paint X on my tablet :D
I'd Love Critiques Please August 31, 2019 09:13 PM


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I think you cut it out well and have good composition. I really like your use of space and how you are able to fit the animals in and make it look like a natural, well thought out scene.

However, I think the lighting is a tad too bright underneath the horse's head. Also, I think it would look more realistic if his back had some moonlight on it, as well. Otherwise, I think you have a good grasp on the lighting.

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