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Tiluu

05:39:30 Honey

Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!

Tiluu

05:39:11 Honey

Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him

Windy Hollow Farms

05:37:58 Windy

wow Capp that splash filly!

05:37:05

also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D

05:36:47

This one, Honey
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Tiluu

05:36:13 Honey

No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD

05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp

Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD

05:34:38

the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?

05:34:10

Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D

Lunoa

05:32:01 Honey

Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!

05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp

Holy crap!! -HEE Click-

Lunoa

05:30:45 Honey

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Yay

05:30:29 Echo <3

So annoyed that im behind on training xD
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05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp

-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!

Windy Hollow Farms

05:28:59 Windy

ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-

Portrait Paints Stud

05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting

Same wk 4s
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05:28:25

He deserves a name, shiny as he is.

05:28:05

Happy that he went all up xD

05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp

Rabi!! *.*

05:27:27 Dery

Thank you Min, that’s really great advice. I’ll do that !

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Tiluu

05:39:30 Honey

Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!

Tiluu

05:39:11 Honey

Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him

Windy Hollow Farms

05:37:58 Windy

wow Capp that splash filly!

05:37:05

also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D

05:36:47

This one, Honey
-HEE Click-

Tiluu

05:36:13 Honey

No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD

05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp

Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD

05:34:38

the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?

05:34:10

Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D

Lunoa

05:32:01 Honey

Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!

05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp

Holy crap!! -HEE Click-

Lunoa

05:30:45 Honey

-HEE Click-
Yay

05:30:29 Echo <3

So annoyed that im behind on training xD
-HEE Click-

05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp

-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!

Windy Hollow Farms

05:28:59 Windy

ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-

Portrait Paints Stud

05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting

Same wk 4s
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

05:28:25

He deserves a name, shiny as he is.

05:28:05

Happy that he went all up xD

05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp

Rabi!! *.*

05:27:27 Dery

Thank you Min, that’s really great advice. I’ll do that !

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Constructive criticism please <3

August 30, 2019 09:25 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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Ok. So your most recent piece is really nice. But the lighting is very, very, off. Your light source is coming from above, yet is far behind the horse.

So I went ahead and TRIED to explain the light and shadow directions via this lovely image.

https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img923/7227/CkJKRq.png

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August 30, 2019 09:30 PM

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Thamks very much jello that's actually really helpful ^^

Since it's. A premade ill try and see what I can do

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August 30, 2019 09:38 PM

Jellos Warmbloods

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I figured color coding might make it easier to understand. XD

I'm awful at descriptive text.

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August 30, 2019 09:40 PM

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It's very useful!

That stock was a pain to match but I wnayed to at least try and do my own lighting if that makes sense?

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August 31, 2019 05:10 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/y8tjj6Fb/Pics-Art-08-31-11-00-59.jpg

Revamped ^^

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August 31, 2019 06:31 AM

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https://i.postimg.cc/MpgNsMNC/Untitled138.jpg

Recent avatar :D

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