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Tiluu
05:39:30 Honey
Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!
Tiluu
05:39:11 Honey
Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him
Windy Hollow Farms
05:37:58 Windy
wow Capp that splash filly!
Breadcrumbs
05:37:05 
also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D
Breadcrumbs
05:36:47 
This one, Honey
-HEE Click-
Tiluu
05:36:13 Honey
No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD
Cappuccino
05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp
Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD
Breadcrumbs
05:34:38 
the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?
Breadcrumbs
05:34:10 
Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D
Lunoa
05:32:01 Honey
Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!
Cappuccino
05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp
Holy crap!! -HEE Click-
Lunoa
05:30:45 Honey
-HEE Click-
Yay
Amethyst Ranch
05:30:29 Echo <3
So annoyed that im behind on training xD
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Cappuccino
05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!
Windy Hollow Farms
05:28:59 Windy
ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-
Portrait Paints Stud
05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting
Same wk 4s
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-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
05:28:25 
He deserves a name, shiny as he is.
Breadcrumbs
05:28:05 
Happy that he went all up xD
Cappuccino
05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp
Rabi!! *.*
Deryview
05:27:27 Dery
Thank you Min, that’s really great advice. I’ll do that !

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Tiluu
05:39:30 Honey
Yeah I saw your boy! Very exciting!
Tiluu
05:39:11 Honey
Ohhh nice! I need to stalk him
Windy Hollow Farms
05:37:58 Windy
wow Capp that splash filly!
Breadcrumbs
05:37:05 
also my prl splash rabi WB was all up wk 4 too :D
Breadcrumbs
05:36:47 
This one, Honey
-HEE Click-
Tiluu
05:36:13 Honey
No I didnt? :o What did I miss again xD
Cappuccino
05:35:05 Heyy it's Capp
Thanks yall!! <3 Yusss just hope she's not trolling with that training XD
Breadcrumbs
05:34:38 
the frame pon boy from Dimmeh went all up wk 4, Honey ;D Did you see?
Breadcrumbs
05:34:10 
Oh wow, Capps, i need an embryo :D
Lunoa
05:32:01 Honey
Ohhh congrats, that's exciting!
Cappuccino
05:31:32 Heyy it's Capp
Holy crap!! -HEE Click-
Lunoa
05:30:45 Honey
-HEE Click-
Yay
Amethyst Ranch
05:30:29 Echo <3
So annoyed that im behind on training xD
-HEE Click-
Cappuccino
05:29:37 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- LOL ok sweet!
Windy Hollow Farms
05:28:59 Windy
ugh only up 1 week 7, -HEE Click-
Portrait Paints Stud
05:28:27 Dulcie Is Painting
Same wk 4s
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
05:28:25 
He deserves a name, shiny as he is.
Breadcrumbs
05:28:05 
Happy that he went all up xD
Cappuccino
05:27:38 Heyy it's Capp
Rabi!! *.*
Deryview
05:27:27 Dery
Thank you Min, that’s really great advice. I’ll do that !

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Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 01:02 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:


TheTriggeredHipster said:
What program do you have, Luxxy?

Ibis Paint X on Google Play


Well, first of all:
Huge congrats and kudos to you for doing some excellent work using a paint program. I was completely unable to tell that you hadn't been using professional grade editing software (like Photoshop). I am unfamiliar with that program, but I do have a couple edits for you to consider in your future works. :)

Things I like:

- Your cutting is clean
- Your hair is great, and has movement.
- Your composition is spot-on.
- You put out unique, quality work.

Things you might try:

- Try matching your horse to its background just a little more. Horse coats naturally reflect colored light around them. I achieve this using "Color Balance" in Photoshop, but there may be an alternative way to do this in your own program (look for words like "cool filter" or "color cast". For example, your gorgeous unicorn piece:

Before:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcKgM.jpg

After (changing color tones):
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcrv2.jpg


- Try doing a bit of background blur, to bring focus to your subject. This will make them pop! I use "Lens Blur" in Photoshop, but you might have other blur filters in your program. Also - watch your lighting! In your four horse banner, you have one horse who's lighting is coming from the opposite direction of the others! (I have drawn in the light source with teal arrows)

An example of background blending (I don't have the layers of this one, and just did a VERY ROUGH edit for the blur as an example, lol), and arrows to show light source:

Before:
https://i.postimg.cc/zzgVGDhR/Untitled325.jpg

After:
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itcgV9.jpg



Overall, I like your work and I think the only thing I can critique are small edits to refine your work. It's difficult to teach good composition and creativity, so you are on the right path. I personally like your horse prep as it is. <3 Keep at it!

Edited at August 22, 2019 01:04 PM by TheTriggeredHipster
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:11 PM


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*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33
Critique Please :) August 22, 2019 03:32 PM

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Crystal Heart Estate said:
*squeaks*
Thank you so much Trigg!! It means a lot to me to have such an amazing artist as yourself critique my art <3

You have really helped explain everything that I need to work on, I'll screenshot it and use it for future use :)

Again, thank you <33



<3 Don't hesitate to reach out. You're on the right track here!

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