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I made this piece last night before going to bed and I'm pretty happy with it, but I would love some critique.
https://i.lensdump.com/i/irGSs5.jpg |
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That peice is neauriful
Love the hair, always have with your art The horse prep is great
Horse fits in the background and is an appropriate size
Try cutting the horse out so all peice sof the bg are gone, the green parts on the horse |
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Beautiful Zeph!
1. There seem to be parts of the background left on the horse, odd green patches. Make sure to recolor those parts that are on the horse and cut off any you can. 2. There are odd black lines all over the horse, I assume you were going for shadowing? Make sure to blend these out really well and lessen their opacity a bit, the ones on the hindquarters are especially noticeable. 3. The eye has no depth, so try adding some highlights and lowlights to it where the light is hitting it and such. 4. There is an odd grey smudge on the horses front knee, maybe try to remove that. It's the small details that count. 5. Try adding a few more subtle green hues to the horse to really make it fit the background.
I think you did a great job overall on this one, love it! |
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I didn't even realize I left some of the old background on there, thank you guys for pointing that out.
Thank you Amera for the advice, I will try to fix those things as soon as possible. |
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Thank you for the critique guys! I did some touch up based on the advice from both of you, I hope this is better. :)
https://i.lensdump.com/i/itPWYH.jpg |
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The dark lines look much better now! And sometimes honestly the green isn't even the background. Sometimes it's just the lighting being a little more green on the legs like it's reflecting.
The eye looks a little better but it could still use some of that "shine" so to speak to make it look a little more rounded. Doesn't need to be huge as it can EASILY overwhelm the eye. The dark shading could be a little lighter on the face as well
Aside from that, the background is more clear than the horse so the background could use some blurring to make it seem like the horse is the focal point.
Your hair is wonderful, keep up the good work :)
Future reference the higher quality horse stock you choose the more clear and clean it'll come out and look :) |
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Nordic Designs said:
The dark lines look much better now! And sometimes honestly the green isn't even the background. Sometimes it's just the lighting being a little more green on the legs like it's reflecting.
The eye looks a little better but it could still use some of that "shine" so to speak to make it look a little more rounded. Doesn't need to be huge as it can EASILY overwhelm the eye. The dark shading could be a little lighter on the face as well
Aside from that, the background is more clear than the horse so the background could use some blurring to make it seem like the horse is the focal point.
Your hair is wonderful, keep up the good work :)
Future reference the higher quality horse stock you choose the more clear and clean it'll come out and look :)
Thank you so much! The background blurring is always something I forget to do. Lol |
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