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Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
πŸ˜‚ I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg πŸ˜‚
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci

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Calela Eventing
06:46:54 Cali
I've been told they are, especially Rowan
FirstLightFarms
06:46:26 puck
Oh those aren't dog names at all!
Calela Eventing
06:46:00 Cali
There's Emmet, Rowan, Ally, Finch, Robin
FirstLightFarms
06:43:58 puck
LMAO love that. What are their names?
Calela Eventing
06:39:48 Cali
If it makes you feel bette half my characters names sound like dog names
FirstLightFarms
06:38:32 puck
πŸ˜‚ I just couldn't think of anything better
Calela Eventing
06:31:51 Cali
I will, I'm so excited for it!
I actually love your name
FirstLightFarms
06:30:13 puck
Project Finch sounds cool, def hit me up when you're ready for readers !
FirstLightFarms
06:29:52 puck
Welcome to White Pine Ranch :)
Calela Eventing
06:26:34 Cali
What's your story called?
mines called Project Finch
FirstLightFarms
06:25:48 puck
Omg πŸ˜‚
FirstLightFarms
06:25:36 puck
Thanks! I'm revamping it now and playing with self publishing it just for funsies.

How about your story??
Calela Eventing
06:25:36 Cali
Mines very horror-y vibes, I also can't have a good character alive for more than 10 pages without wanting to kill them off
ArcticLights
06:23:45 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Puck, that sounds like a great plot :)
Calela Eventing
06:22:50 Cali
oooohhh I love the plot! Would actually love to read that if you ever publish it
FirstLightFarms
06:20:30 puck
Love to hear that! Its such a huge part of my life too, it can be so challenging yet rewarding.

Its about a girl that's sent to a camp that uses mustangs to aid with mental health/troubled kids issues, but somebody is killing the mustangs and she has to figure out who before the one she's assigned to gets hurt
Calela Eventing
06:18:59 Cali
puck
Writing is the best thing tarts happened to me!
What's the plot like?
FirstLightFarms
06:17:49 puck
Ooh I'm editing a murder mystery right now but I'm not sure who the murderer is yet
Calela Eventing
06:16:28 Cali
I'm busy writing this novel, its a murder mystery, but I am absolutely in love with the murderer
Shamrock Equines
06:15:55 Crowley
Lol Ceci

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM


TheTriggeredHipster
 
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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