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Rubygem-Chenya
06:02:40 Ruby/Cheshire
So I like losing(:
Rubygem-Chenya
06:02:30 Ruby/Cheshire
I hate being competitive
Circle Star RIDs
06:01:56 Granny C
Humans are just very competitive creatures.
You see it in all sports, all walks of life, even with siblings.
Rubygem-Chenya
06:01:03 Ruby/Cheshire
Hello
Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary

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Rubygem-Chenya
06:02:40 Ruby/Cheshire
So I like losing(:
Rubygem-Chenya
06:02:30 Ruby/Cheshire
I hate being competitive
Circle Star RIDs
06:01:56 Granny C
Humans are just very competitive creatures.
You see it in all sports, all walks of life, even with siblings.
Rubygem-Chenya
06:01:03 Ruby/Cheshire
Hello
Gemstone Stable
05:58:25 Snow❆Gem
@myth

Oh boy oh boy! O.o
Transformers Acres
05:56:54 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Granny

Like, maybe it's me, but why can't people just enjoy the fact that horses are jut good, regardless of gender? I don't understand the comparison, maybe it's just me, though.
Transformers Acres
05:54:28 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

I've never read books on Seabiscuit, but I do own the movie starring Tobey Maguire
Circle Star RIDs
05:54:02 Granny C
Geek - money.....it's all about the Bengamin's
Mythological
05:53:39 Crowley | Krampus
Gem
Someone wouldn't stop giving a stud there treats. It was blowing up my mail. xD
Gemstone Stable
05:52:15 Snow❆Gem
@myth

lol :D
Distorted Humor
05:51:28 
The one match race I love is the seabiscuit v War Admiral, I reread seabiscuit a lot
Mythological
05:51:12 Crowley | Krampus
I thought I turned off treat notifications but nope that apparently was on Sham xD
Gemstone Stable
05:49:45 Snow❆Gem
SH Nixed EE Rn Spl WWW 198 eats the treat then paws the ground anxiously.

So does she like the carrots? lol
Transformers Acres
05:49:35 Geek, Greek Yogurt
I don't, like, understand why'd they would do that (match race) in general. Like, she was just as good as any other racehorse, despite being seen as "less than" in that era. Then again, I don't understand match races in general.
Circle Star RIDs
05:46:12 Granny C
I actually watch that race as it happened. It left such an impression on me, I named a pup we had after her.
Transformers Acres
05:46:11 Geek, Greek Yogurt
Humor

Legit, same. I watch that movie a lot, and I also watch the legit 1975 footage. :(
Circle Star RIDs
05:44:53 Granny C
lol Hollywood it's a hoot
Distorted Humor
05:44:32 
Partly unrelated - I also got “traumatized” (not sure if that’s the right word?) by the clip of Ruffian breaking her leg and refuse to read or watch the book and movie
Distorted Humor
05:42:18 
More specifically I think it was just me reacting I’m a little sensitive but I also listen to cold case/true crime podcasts soooo
Distorted Humor
05:41:16 
Welll Steve being attacked by the bats and how much they bit him and such not to spoil anything was a bit scary

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Critique Please August 20, 2019 08:00 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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New ones
https://i.postimg.cc/HxjZHKVz/DE56-D190-08-A0-459-B-977-F-E5-D27-C1-C0-C66.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/3R6LwBGT/231-C5429-2621-4-CED-AC53-E77-B38177-F15.jpg

Edited at August 20, 2019 08:00 PM by Raindrop Ridge
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:17 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Even more new ones
https://i.postimg.cc/sxx0vNS6/5411-CEE4-683-F-417-A-9-A35-598054-E49822.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/P5YVpZpj/726-A30-D0-E880-4-A35-B648-BE557-EB5077-C.jpg
https://i.postimg.cc/zv4p3Xqv/B1-DC0-AD1-E38-B-40-C4-BDB8-2-D4-F5-BD602-EC.jpg
Critique Please August 31, 2019 07:35 PM


Aussie Wattles
 
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They look a lot better!
They do still look kinda like a blob on the ground though. Thing about where the lights coming from and the shape of the horse. Looking at RL photos as well as others art can help give you an idea of where shadows should be. Make sure your edges are nice and soft. The hardness and the darkness/lightness of a shadow will vary between pieces.
Overall it just takes a lot of practice.

What device do you use for your art?
Critique Please September 1, 2019 02:02 AM

Former Stable
 
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Hey Raindrop!

My best critique would be to work on realistic shadowing, like others have suggested. Your shadows are off to a great start! They are just too dark and too shapeless at the moment.

These DA tutorials might help!

https://www.deviantart.com/lady-entice/art/Shadow-tutorial-186362600

https://www.deviantart.com/xxsanuk/art/shadow-tutorial-for-GIMP-173291036


I would also make sure that your subject and background are well matched (size-wise). The second horse (the bay on the wood pier) stands out the most for me. He is pretty tiny, compared to the wood planks. :)

Otherwise, you do a pretty good job of finding stock with decent matching lighting/coloration to your backgrounds. Keep practicing! So many things come from just trying new things. <3 You are on your way.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 10:05 AM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Thanks Trigg and Aussie, IÂ’ll try that next time, I think itÂ’ll really help.
Aussie, I use my iPad, but sometimes my Computer.
Critique Please September 1, 2019 07:06 PM


Raindrop Ridge
 
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Any pricing help would be nice too.

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