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Autumn Leaf
09:04:47 Win | 우፸
Hazard
Why would me? I can name any song for ya from Enha, Skz of Katseye... Also, I would of shown ya a vid of me dancing, but I feel like it's not allowed

Aris
If you're a trainee, you need to preform in heels all the time, no matter of the routine you're doing. Im doing to just prepare in case I get in
Nolified
09:04:06 Hazard
Ok good lol, its nice to have some other people to talk to who want the same dream <3
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:47 Aris/Quinn
Win

It was group under jyp that alleged many things about the company
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:17 Aris/Quinn
Nah I'm serious
Autumn Leaf
09:03:08 Win | 우፸
Aris
What the honest fuck is Vcha??

Hazard
Yass!
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:07 Aris/Quinn
In heels???? For chk chk boom???
Nolified
09:02:59 Hazard
Win & Aris,
are yall serious about this or are yall messing with me?
Gemstone Stable
09:02:59 Snow❆Gem
Good night eveyone! :) *falls into bed*
Autumn Leaf
09:02:29 Win | 우፸
Aris
In March, I had a solo performance of Chk Chk Boom (skz) infant of the judges - just for them to see how my dance is doing. But also, to check my balance, I had to wear heels, but a heel broke I twisted my ankle and blah blah blah- Also, OK, if I get in as a trainee... My horses? Dogs?
Nolified
09:02:17 Hazard
I want to audition for JYP too. as long as we all audition for JYP then we could see eachother as trainees or maybe even in the same group!
ghost light stables
09:02:13 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Ducky
I just showed cabee the art you made and he responded by making the same face he did in the art
-Click-
Tenebris Hollow
09:01:33 Aris/Quinn
Yea I agree with alot of jyp's terms but there was the whole thing with Vcha
Autumn Leaf
09:00:46 Win | 우፸
Hazard
I want HYBE or JYP... Both of them are amazing, but I read that HYBE isn't safe, as it makes trainee's dance 16 hours per day, and 30 minutes for lunch- But JYP seems good, they also have 24/7 auditions open for anyone - nationality, gender, age, etc.
Tenebris Hollow
09:00:13 Aris/Quinn
Win
Its just my dancing mainly I'm not very good
Nolified
08:59:44 Hazard
DD,
Lol
Tenebris Hollow
08:59:39 Aris/Quinn
Yuhhh
Dash and Duchess
08:59:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Now ya'll got me in the mood to listen to some kpop xD
Nolified
08:59:05 Hazard
Win,
depend if we're in the same entertainment.

Aris,
Really? Wait what if me, win, and aris got into the same group! oh my gosh, that would be fun
Autumn Leaf
08:58:39 Win | 우፸
Aris
mine went down after a concert I had the other month-
The Old Gods
08:57:49 Void Malign
You can help scrape the botfly eggs of the horses

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Autumn Leaf
09:04:47 Win | 우፸
Hazard
Why would me? I can name any song for ya from Enha, Skz of Katseye... Also, I would of shown ya a vid of me dancing, but I feel like it's not allowed

Aris
If you're a trainee, you need to preform in heels all the time, no matter of the routine you're doing. Im doing to just prepare in case I get in
Nolified
09:04:06 Hazard
Ok good lol, its nice to have some other people to talk to who want the same dream <3
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:47 Aris/Quinn
Win

It was group under jyp that alleged many things about the company
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:17 Aris/Quinn
Nah I'm serious
Autumn Leaf
09:03:08 Win | 우፸
Aris
What the honest fuck is Vcha??

Hazard
Yass!
Tenebris Hollow
09:03:07 Aris/Quinn
In heels???? For chk chk boom???
Nolified
09:02:59 Hazard
Win & Aris,
are yall serious about this or are yall messing with me?
Gemstone Stable
09:02:59 Snow❆Gem
Good night eveyone! :) *falls into bed*
Autumn Leaf
09:02:29 Win | 우፸
Aris
In March, I had a solo performance of Chk Chk Boom (skz) infant of the judges - just for them to see how my dance is doing. But also, to check my balance, I had to wear heels, but a heel broke I twisted my ankle and blah blah blah- Also, OK, if I get in as a trainee... My horses? Dogs?
Nolified
09:02:17 Hazard
I want to audition for JYP too. as long as we all audition for JYP then we could see eachother as trainees or maybe even in the same group!
ghost light stables
09:02:13 Ghost rapcoon(the og
Ducky
I just showed cabee the art you made and he responded by making the same face he did in the art
-Click-
Tenebris Hollow
09:01:33 Aris/Quinn
Yea I agree with alot of jyp's terms but there was the whole thing with Vcha
Autumn Leaf
09:00:46 Win | 우፸
Hazard
I want HYBE or JYP... Both of them are amazing, but I read that HYBE isn't safe, as it makes trainee's dance 16 hours per day, and 30 minutes for lunch- But JYP seems good, they also have 24/7 auditions open for anyone - nationality, gender, age, etc.
Tenebris Hollow
09:00:13 Aris/Quinn
Win
Its just my dancing mainly I'm not very good
Nolified
08:59:44 Hazard
DD,
Lol
Tenebris Hollow
08:59:39 Aris/Quinn
Yuhhh
Dash and Duchess
08:59:10 DD | ~Squizard~
Now ya'll got me in the mood to listen to some kpop xD
Nolified
08:59:05 Hazard
Win,
depend if we're in the same entertainment.

Aris,
Really? Wait what if me, win, and aris got into the same group! oh my gosh, that would be fun
Autumn Leaf
08:58:39 Win | 우፸
Aris
mine went down after a concert I had the other month-
The Old Gods
08:57:49 Void Malign
You can help scrape the botfly eggs of the horses

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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