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Glacier Bay Cove
08:52:12 Glacier Kittens
Spotted chimera
Glacier Bay Cove
08:50:59 Glacier Kittens
I have one of those in my unsorted horse barn, and they are so adorable
Nightingales Ridge
08:42:43 𔓘 Issy
Sting *.* I've only seen that once before. Super neat
Ironhorse
08:41:04 Sting
Chim*
-HEE Click-
Ironhorse
08:40:49 Sting
Love a Spotty -HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
08:38:45 𔓘 Issy
Has there always been 6 explore biomes or were some added later
The Old Gods
08:31:07 Void Malign
Update: it still fuckin wimdy
WildWind Equestrians
08:17:46 Wild
(wolf I mean)
WildWind Equestrians
08:17:35 Wild
people can be so horrible somtimes
WildWind Equestrians
08:16:37 Wild
Issy
yeah I know I am lucky... I feel like I owe them a lot in the future. another WWW or somthing. but was from cali so... but still
Dash and Duchess
08:15:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, Oh gosh that's awful!! People really are the worst sometimes >.>
WildWind Equestrians
08:15:37 Wild
Wolf your joking. are the police involved?
Guard Horseman Gang
08:15:26 GHG
oof i woke up this morning to a charge o my credit card for a google phone almost 700 and was luckily able to cancel it. I dont know if someone tried to hack me or if i was super drunk and accidentally tried to order it XD
Wolf Dancer
08:13:16 Wolf Burger (Leg)
GHG
It's sucks they took my track bag with a bunch of Olympians signitures on it, my shoes, my necklace in the bag the one day I took it off too, my wallet and spent $80 on gas at a gas station using my debit card >.>
Guard Horseman Gang
08:12:10 GHG
sorry to hear that leg
Wolf Dancer
08:11:28 Wolf Burger (Leg)
People are such jerks for no reason sometimes. My car got broken into last night >.>
Guard Horseman Gang
08:10:49 GHG
hoping for my first Home bred WWW sometime in May
Guard Horseman Gang
08:10:12 GHG
also bred a EEE peacock appy
-HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
08:09:22 GHG
I got lucky with WWWs this year breeding 1 of only 2 brindle www horses born this year thus far
-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
07:55:52 𔓘 Issy
Wild.. very lucky to have been gifted one <3

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Glacier Bay Cove
08:52:12 Glacier Kittens
Spotted chimera
Glacier Bay Cove
08:50:59 Glacier Kittens
I have one of those in my unsorted horse barn, and they are so adorable
Nightingales Ridge
08:42:43 𔓘 Issy
Sting *.* I've only seen that once before. Super neat
Ironhorse
08:41:04 Sting
Chim*
-HEE Click-
Ironhorse
08:40:49 Sting
Love a Spotty -HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
08:38:45 𔓘 Issy
Has there always been 6 explore biomes or were some added later
The Old Gods
08:31:07 Void Malign
Update: it still fuckin wimdy
WildWind Equestrians
08:17:46 Wild
(wolf I mean)
WildWind Equestrians
08:17:35 Wild
people can be so horrible somtimes
WildWind Equestrians
08:16:37 Wild
Issy
yeah I know I am lucky... I feel like I owe them a lot in the future. another WWW or somthing. but was from cali so... but still
Dash and Duchess
08:15:53 DD | ~Squizard~
Wilf, Oh gosh that's awful!! People really are the worst sometimes >.>
WildWind Equestrians
08:15:37 Wild
Wolf your joking. are the police involved?
Guard Horseman Gang
08:15:26 GHG
oof i woke up this morning to a charge o my credit card for a google phone almost 700 and was luckily able to cancel it. I dont know if someone tried to hack me or if i was super drunk and accidentally tried to order it XD
Wolf Dancer
08:13:16 Wolf Burger (Leg)
GHG
It's sucks they took my track bag with a bunch of Olympians signitures on it, my shoes, my necklace in the bag the one day I took it off too, my wallet and spent $80 on gas at a gas station using my debit card >.>
Guard Horseman Gang
08:12:10 GHG
sorry to hear that leg
Wolf Dancer
08:11:28 Wolf Burger (Leg)
People are such jerks for no reason sometimes. My car got broken into last night >.>
Guard Horseman Gang
08:10:49 GHG
hoping for my first Home bred WWW sometime in May
Guard Horseman Gang
08:10:12 GHG
also bred a EEE peacock appy
-HEE Click-
Guard Horseman Gang
08:09:22 GHG
I got lucky with WWWs this year breeding 1 of only 2 brindle www horses born this year thus far
-HEE Click-
Nightingales Ridge
07:55:52 𔓘 Issy
Wild.. very lucky to have been gifted one <3

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Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 07:53 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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I would like some critique on my two most recent pieces. This includes techniques, lighting, price, etc. Anything is helpful.
I am currently asking for 40k for these, is that too much or just right?
#1
https://i.postimg.cc/NjGTX7qZ/Fire-Foot-Avatar.png
#2
https://i.postimg.cc/W3Jws5XR/Zipzuka-s-Commission.png


Edited at February 11, 2019 08:49 AM by Golden Hall Stables
Critique And Pricing Help February 7, 2019 06:17 PM

Former Stable
 
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I think you're really talented! That being said, the horses are really big compared to the backgrounds, I'm not sure if that's something you're going for. In addition, I'd work on connecting the feet to the ground. The flames on the first one's feet in particular look a bit off and aren't giving off the light I'd expect them to.
Critique And Pricing Help February 8, 2019 09:09 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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The horses are big in the background because they are cut into horse avatars. I didn't have them that big initially.
Critique And Pricing Help February 11, 2019 05:20 PM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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Does anyone else have any more critique?
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 05:05 AM

Former Stable
 
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(Still in love with the piece you did for me by the way!)

I noticed this while looking through your art, and the three things I'm really picking up on is the grounding, the mane and tail, and sometimes the coat

With the grounding, I just feel like the hooves always look like they're floating a bit? Like what White Crown said, they look disconnected and feel very different from the rest of the piece. Maybe try shading the hooves a bit on the front more? Or erasing parts to make it look like things are in front of the horse. Also, with the flames, maybe add a glow on the ground directly underneath the flames to make it more connected.

The mane and tail sometimes look very solid. Like the entire thing is just a block of hair and drawing, and highlighting and shading? It just seems very strange to me at times, especially in brighter lighting in some pieces. Try adding some fly-aways or trying to make larger chunks of hair fall away from the general shape. I noticed this mostly in the tails, by the way.

With the coat, it looks over-smudged sometimes. I do that when I do art, and I just do the smudging on another layer, then turn the opacity of that layer specifically down so the coat underneath shines through a bit more.

I know this was long, and I'm sorry, but I just had to (I still adore your art by the way. The way you do patterns and markings is incredible!)
Critique And Pricing Help February 13, 2019 07:54 AM


Golden Hall Stables
 
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