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Crestwood Eq.
10:47:34 Ivy / poison ivy
this was not how i planned to feel on the days coming ot my birthday. but whatever. my mom flipped her lid at me on my 10th birthday for god knows why.
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:27 Ivy / poison ivy
i've always been the person who thought so and so was her bestie, but i wasn't their bestie.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:59 Ivy / poison ivy
gypsy

im going to be 14 on monday.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:08 Ivy / poison ivy
void

i try my best. i swear.
Sunni
10:44:43 Sunni bunny
But afterwards she came up to apologize.
Took a year but XD.
one of her family told a lie about my family talking trash.
Never happened, they just missed understood.
We where talking about my brothers jumping in the pool and ripping holes in the bottom of it.
Crestwood Eq.
10:44:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

i guess. i hate life. i've tried and tried my whole life to please people. i've said sorry to people i know wont accept it. i've done all i can. im not perfect. there are so many things in my life that i should've been said sorry to for, but you know, i wasn't. i've lost too many people in my life that i try my hardest to keep the people i can.

AND NO ONE WILL EVER TALK ABOUT MY WYLDER LIKE THAT!

Sunni
10:43:07 Sunni bunny
Ivy, sounds like you might be putting your friendship into people who don't really know how friendship works.
Friendship is about understanding, flexibility, being there.
Me and my best friend Cameron, have been together since kindergarten.
We have fought before one was pretty nasty.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:42:19 
And that's okay, Ivy; forgive me if it sounds like I am talking down to you, I'm absolutely not.

But you may not have found your person yet. I gather that you are younger, correct me if I am wrong, and it's hard to stay with people some times while everyone is growing and changing. I had a best friend until I was about twelve, and then after that I had a lot of really good friends, but not one person alone, if that makes sense?
The Old Gods
10:41:26 Void Malign
to be honest, if you keep getting dropped by friends, it's probably a sign to examine yourself and your behavior.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:30 Arctic Katz
Sounds like they were never true friends at all, in my opinion
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:49 Ivy / poison ivy
arctic

thanks.


this girl (her brother said that to me). she was my best friend. sad truth reveal. i've never had a best friend that stayed for over 8 months.
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:02 Ivy / poison ivy
but you dont understand
Glacier Bay Cove
10:38:47 Arctic Katz
Not sure what is going on, but I will always be a friend to you, Crestwood
Gypsy Family Farm
10:38:42 
Also? If you have lost friends over this, they weren't real friends, they were fandom friends. (I've been there. Still hurts.)
Gypsy Family Farm
10:37:51 
Ivy, that sounds like a good person to block if you can; this kind of social media bullying can escalate and it's already pretty personal.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:53 Ivy / poison ivy
and now i've lost like 4-6 best friends this month.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:36:47 
Okay this is a new quest. Capture 8 triple subpar horses. LOL.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:17 Ivy / poison ivy
here's the first bit
-----------
hey ivy just wanted to tell u to stay the heck away from my acc bc yr literally fake i was only acting enthusiastic abt yr ugly crush bc i was trying to be nice but in reality idc no one in their right mind would think that his freak looking self is good looking and idk why yr getting yr hopes up anyway its not like hes even going to look at u and i doubt he likes u bcno one likes u now ik why cari dropped u bc yr self centered and full of yr self now im dropping u and so is my sister dont even dry denying any of this bc my sister told me everything and also stop acting like u care abt liam bc u dont if u truly cared u would have responded to all those pins i sent u! +
Canterwood Acres
10:36:10 Canter
what was going on?
Crestwood Eq.
10:35:48 Ivy / poison ivy
oh wait. i forgot the first bit

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Crestwood Eq.
10:47:34 Ivy / poison ivy
this was not how i planned to feel on the days coming ot my birthday. but whatever. my mom flipped her lid at me on my 10th birthday for god knows why.
Crestwood Eq.
10:46:27 Ivy / poison ivy
i've always been the person who thought so and so was her bestie, but i wasn't their bestie.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:59 Ivy / poison ivy
gypsy

im going to be 14 on monday.
Crestwood Eq.
10:45:08 Ivy / poison ivy
void

i try my best. i swear.
Sunni
10:44:43 Sunni bunny
But afterwards she came up to apologize.
Took a year but XD.
one of her family told a lie about my family talking trash.
Never happened, they just missed understood.
We where talking about my brothers jumping in the pool and ripping holes in the bottom of it.
Crestwood Eq.
10:44:36 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

i guess. i hate life. i've tried and tried my whole life to please people. i've said sorry to people i know wont accept it. i've done all i can. im not perfect. there are so many things in my life that i should've been said sorry to for, but you know, i wasn't. i've lost too many people in my life that i try my hardest to keep the people i can.

AND NO ONE WILL EVER TALK ABOUT MY WYLDER LIKE THAT!

Sunni
10:43:07 Sunni bunny
Ivy, sounds like you might be putting your friendship into people who don't really know how friendship works.
Friendship is about understanding, flexibility, being there.
Me and my best friend Cameron, have been together since kindergarten.
We have fought before one was pretty nasty.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:42:19 
And that's okay, Ivy; forgive me if it sounds like I am talking down to you, I'm absolutely not.

But you may not have found your person yet. I gather that you are younger, correct me if I am wrong, and it's hard to stay with people some times while everyone is growing and changing. I had a best friend until I was about twelve, and then after that I had a lot of really good friends, but not one person alone, if that makes sense?
The Old Gods
10:41:26 Void Malign
to be honest, if you keep getting dropped by friends, it's probably a sign to examine yourself and your behavior.
Glacier Bay Cove
10:40:30 Arctic Katz
Sounds like they were never true friends at all, in my opinion
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:49 Ivy / poison ivy
arctic

thanks.


this girl (her brother said that to me). she was my best friend. sad truth reveal. i've never had a best friend that stayed for over 8 months.
Crestwood Eq.
10:39:02 Ivy / poison ivy
but you dont understand
Glacier Bay Cove
10:38:47 Arctic Katz
Not sure what is going on, but I will always be a friend to you, Crestwood
Gypsy Family Farm
10:38:42 
Also? If you have lost friends over this, they weren't real friends, they were fandom friends. (I've been there. Still hurts.)
Gypsy Family Farm
10:37:51 
Ivy, that sounds like a good person to block if you can; this kind of social media bullying can escalate and it's already pretty personal.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:53 Ivy / poison ivy
and now i've lost like 4-6 best friends this month.
Gypsy Family Farm
10:36:47 
Okay this is a new quest. Capture 8 triple subpar horses. LOL.
Crestwood Eq.
10:36:17 Ivy / poison ivy
here's the first bit
-----------
hey ivy just wanted to tell u to stay the heck away from my acc bc yr literally fake i was only acting enthusiastic abt yr ugly crush bc i was trying to be nice but in reality idc no one in their right mind would think that his freak looking self is good looking and idk why yr getting yr hopes up anyway its not like hes even going to look at u and i doubt he likes u bcno one likes u now ik why cari dropped u bc yr self centered and full of yr self now im dropping u and so is my sister dont even dry denying any of this bc my sister told me everything and also stop acting like u care abt liam bc u dont if u truly cared u would have responded to all those pins i sent u! +
Canterwood Acres
10:36:10 Canter
what was going on?
Crestwood Eq.
10:35:48 Ivy / poison ivy
oh wait. i forgot the first bit

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Crituque and Pricing? October 10, 2018 02:43 PM


Wildwood Stables
 
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https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=16694038 https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17066483
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=17319424
https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=16958106
I will be adding more examples soon

What should these be selling at and criticize please! Also how can i improve!

Edited at October 10, 2018 02:46 PM by Wildwood Stables
Crituque and Pricing? October 10, 2018 02:45 PM

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Lighting For sure. Make sure the horse looks like it belongs there. Not jus placed like in you first one that horse looks a little bright and in the second one the horse looks to dark.

Also make sure you add shadows.
Crituque and Pricing? October 10, 2018 02:47 PM


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Lazy Duck Elites said:
Lighting For sure. Make sure the horse looks like it belongs there. Not jus placed like in you first one that horse looks a little bright and in the second one the horse looks to dark.

Also make sure you add shadows.


Thank you i have tried to add shadows and lighting the best i could as shown in the last example
Crituque and Pricing? October 11, 2018 11:27 AM

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You need to put shadows on the horses as well as in the background. In the last one, the light is coming from behind the horse so we ought to be able to see that the edges of the horse are lit up while the parts not touched by light are dark. I would recommend looking at stock images online and identifying how light works in those photos. It will make a big difference in the quality of your work.
Crituque and Pricing? October 11, 2018 04:51 PM


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White Crown Stables said:
You need to put shadows on the horses as well as in the background. In the last one, the light is coming from behind the horse so we ought to be able to see that the edges of the horse are lit up while the parts not touched by light are dark. I would recommend looking at stock images online and identifying how light works in those photos. It will make a big difference in the quality of your work.

Thanks!

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