Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Bug in a Rug
11:17:11 Bug | Flea | KPH
Yeah
Insignia Elites
11:16:41 Em
With the fetch quest does it take the item away?
Wraithcry Farm
11:12:02 Trigger 🐾
Snakes do the derpiest crap i swear.
All Breeds
10:55:51 Fawn
That's how our BCI was initially when he was a baby noodle. He was scared of his food and wouldn't eat so we had to do the box trick.
Angels angels
10:51:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
She got it down though lol last week I had to show her where it was 5 times because everytime she let it go to readjust she lost it lol

I had a sand boa and jeez she had nothing in between those eyes. She would sit there with the mouse in her mouth for like an hour not moving then slowly eat it over the corse of another hour
All Breeds
10:48:54 Fawn
Angels, balls are so goofy xD I think I have one that's more derpy now then mine though. I got a Kenyan sand boa a few weeks ago now from a friend who was rehoming her and she's so adorable
Angels angels
10:41:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-Click-
She is trying to eat her mouse while in the branches. It isn't going well lol
Paradise Stables
10:41:23 Ariel / Tara
It works, I use it
Angels angels
10:40:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Munn
That is what Eve said lol if it works I don't know
Munchkin Stables
10:37:03 Munn - PONs
angel - I'll try that. Hope you're right.
Angels angels
10:35:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Munn
If you change it to list instead of card it is supposed to remember that even when you log off
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:55 Arctic Katz
Working on reaching that goal, eventually
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:21 Arctic Katz
I could use 3 million for the next RO, and the next capture party
Munchkin Stables
10:33:01 Munn - PONs
Having the default view on Card, is becoming rather annoying.
Angels angels
10:30:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need another 2.5 million for RO 😬
That is straws, items, and breeding fees
Painted View Ranch
10:28:42 PVR Paint/Painted
@jewel it's on chatzy. I'll send a link around 11:30 game time here. Just click on it and join with stable name and number. It's fun
Vancouver
10:28:07 Ana / Van
My accountant was actually in an ambulance once!
Crestwood Eq.
10:25:58 Ivy / poison ivy
hello again
Angels angels
10:25:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol 20/21 of my matches for RO are using filly Items. I am not getting any colts! XD
Sweet Valley
10:24:59 Anna/Jewel
Cool

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Bug in a Rug
11:17:11 Bug | Flea | KPH
Yeah
Insignia Elites
11:16:41 Em
With the fetch quest does it take the item away?
Wraithcry Farm
11:12:02 Trigger 🐾
Snakes do the derpiest crap i swear.
All Breeds
10:55:51 Fawn
That's how our BCI was initially when he was a baby noodle. He was scared of his food and wouldn't eat so we had to do the box trick.
Angels angels
10:51:12 [1k+ brindles] Angel
She got it down though lol last week I had to show her where it was 5 times because everytime she let it go to readjust she lost it lol

I had a sand boa and jeez she had nothing in between those eyes. She would sit there with the mouse in her mouth for like an hour not moving then slowly eat it over the corse of another hour
All Breeds
10:48:54 Fawn
Angels, balls are so goofy xD I think I have one that's more derpy now then mine though. I got a Kenyan sand boa a few weeks ago now from a friend who was rehoming her and she's so adorable
Angels angels
10:41:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-Click-
She is trying to eat her mouse while in the branches. It isn't going well lol
Paradise Stables
10:41:23 Ariel / Tara
It works, I use it
Angels angels
10:40:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Munn
That is what Eve said lol if it works I don't know
Munchkin Stables
10:37:03 Munn - PONs
angel - I'll try that. Hope you're right.
Angels angels
10:35:51 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Munn
If you change it to list instead of card it is supposed to remember that even when you log off
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:55 Arctic Katz
Working on reaching that goal, eventually
Glacier Bay Cove
10:33:21 Arctic Katz
I could use 3 million for the next RO, and the next capture party
Munchkin Stables
10:33:01 Munn - PONs
Having the default view on Card, is becoming rather annoying.
Angels angels
10:30:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I need another 2.5 million for RO 😬
That is straws, items, and breeding fees
Painted View Ranch
10:28:42 PVR Paint/Painted
@jewel it's on chatzy. I'll send a link around 11:30 game time here. Just click on it and join with stable name and number. It's fun
Vancouver
10:28:07 Ana / Van
My accountant was actually in an ambulance once!
Crestwood Eq.
10:25:58 Ivy / poison ivy
hello again
Angels angels
10:25:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol 20/21 of my matches for RO are using filly Items. I am not getting any colts! XD
Sweet Valley
10:24:59 Anna/Jewel
Cool

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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