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The Old Gods
08:22:58 Void Malign
I'm convinced she actually has fingers under those hooves and managed to undo the clip for the gate
WildWind
08:22:54 Wild
yes what Issy said Milile
Nightingales Ridge
08:22:39 𔓘 Issy
Congratulations Millie :)
Tenebris Hollow
08:22:07 Aris/Maki
She's so pretty void!
WildWind
08:22:03 Wild
Void
uuuuh ok your serious.

Millie
Thankyou
The Old Gods
08:20:57 Void Malign
-Click- Ma'am. How did you get into my yard.
Rosemariny
08:20:44 Millie
Wild - yours is so beautiful, really unique look!
Gemstone Stable
08:20:33 Snow❆Gem
@eury

Yours or a neighbors? >.>
WildWind
08:19:49 Wild
like an actual horse??
WildWind
08:19:29 Wild
you should've seen her as a foal
The Old Gods
08:19:02 Void Malign
I somehow have a horse in my yard
WildWind
08:18:58 Wild
Millie
so pretty!! this was my first brindle, and only one worth keeping.
-HEE Click-
Rosemariny
08:17:48 Millie
-HEE Click- My first brindle!!
WildWind
08:12:46 Wild
oo that second to last in the first page is really pretty gren
Nightingales Ridge
08:11:33 𔓘 Issy
Some real pretties Gren
WildWind
08:11:08 Wild
what's up chat
Birch Creek
07:56:04 Em
thanks Louise
DearBorn Ranch
07:55:23 Louise
no
Greenheart Stables
07:54:48 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Not a bad color haul
Birch Creek
07:54:42 Em
can I use a filly sexed straw item with an embryo that was created using a straw?

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The Old Gods
08:22:58 Void Malign
I'm convinced she actually has fingers under those hooves and managed to undo the clip for the gate
WildWind
08:22:54 Wild
yes what Issy said Milile
Nightingales Ridge
08:22:39 𔓘 Issy
Congratulations Millie :)
Tenebris Hollow
08:22:07 Aris/Maki
She's so pretty void!
WildWind
08:22:03 Wild
Void
uuuuh ok your serious.

Millie
Thankyou
The Old Gods
08:20:57 Void Malign
-Click- Ma'am. How did you get into my yard.
Rosemariny
08:20:44 Millie
Wild - yours is so beautiful, really unique look!
Gemstone Stable
08:20:33 Snow❆Gem
@eury

Yours or a neighbors? >.>
WildWind
08:19:49 Wild
like an actual horse??
WildWind
08:19:29 Wild
you should've seen her as a foal
The Old Gods
08:19:02 Void Malign
I somehow have a horse in my yard
WildWind
08:18:58 Wild
Millie
so pretty!! this was my first brindle, and only one worth keeping.
-HEE Click-
Rosemariny
08:17:48 Millie
-HEE Click- My first brindle!!
WildWind
08:12:46 Wild
oo that second to last in the first page is really pretty gren
Nightingales Ridge
08:11:33 𔓘 Issy
Some real pretties Gren
WildWind
08:11:08 Wild
what's up chat
Birch Creek
07:56:04 Em
thanks Louise
DearBorn Ranch
07:55:23 Louise
no
Greenheart Stables
07:54:48 Gren|Grenlin|Snek
-HEE Click-
Not a bad color haul
Birch Creek
07:54:42 Em
can I use a filly sexed straw item with an embryo that was created using a straw?

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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