Horse Eden Eventing Game
Horse Eden Eventing Game


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Wolf Dancer
01:42:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Versa
Are you ok?
Ivory Coast
01:40:18 
My accountant had a heart attack... whoops.
Versailles
01:36:13 Versa
A transformer on a pole just exploded and it woke me up. That sound is horrifying!
Lunalovegood
01:33:41 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivory
Name ideas
Potato chip
Aslan (From the movie and books of Narnia)
Ivory Coast
01:33:12 
Thorn
That's so cute :0 I'll do that.
Thornwood Manor
01:32:23 
He should be Fries because of his sires name, and his dam could be Frenchie (Potato, Frenchie, and Fries)
Ivory Coast
01:27:08 
Wolf
Yep! I love him, name ideas?
Wolf Dancer
01:24:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ivory
Lol and he didn't bump his sire down either so that's good!
Ivory Coast
01:24:12 
I'll*
Ivory Coast
01:24:04 
Wolf
Yep! I'm definitely keep him, I also love my tobi's ^^
Wolf Dancer
01:23:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Wow! I'm impressed that S was able to come up to a E!
Ivory Coast
01:22:09 
-HEE Click- You're cutee.
AP Legacy
01:18:16 ✨ Sassy
No problems! Hope she throws you something shiny <33
Ivory Coast
01:17:46 
Sassy
I got one, thank you though <3
AP Legacy
01:16:31 ✨ Sassy
I can send you a atraw from my former AALB stallion for free, I just don't know how to change the breeding requirements ):
Ivory Coast
01:11:56 
Riverchase
Thank you, just can't find a WWW stallion with the right minimum breeding rating.
Riverchase Castle
01:10:12 
Ooo, i love the rabicano
Ivory Coast
12:58:41 
That made up for a horrid capture day.
Ivory Coast
12:58:26 
Holy Crap. -HEE Click-
Ivory Coast
12:49:18 
-HEE Click- It's gonna take me so much self control to not keep you.

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Wolf Dancer
01:42:15 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Versa
Are you ok?
Ivory Coast
01:40:18 
My accountant had a heart attack... whoops.
Versailles
01:36:13 Versa
A transformer on a pole just exploded and it woke me up. That sound is horrifying!
Lunalovegood
01:33:41 Loony/Loony Tune
Ivory
Name ideas
Potato chip
Aslan (From the movie and books of Narnia)
Ivory Coast
01:33:12 
Thorn
That's so cute :0 I'll do that.
Thornwood Manor
01:32:23 
He should be Fries because of his sires name, and his dam could be Frenchie (Potato, Frenchie, and Fries)
Ivory Coast
01:27:08 
Wolf
Yep! I love him, name ideas?
Wolf Dancer
01:24:59 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Ivory
Lol and he didn't bump his sire down either so that's good!
Ivory Coast
01:24:12 
I'll*
Ivory Coast
01:24:04 
Wolf
Yep! I'm definitely keep him, I also love my tobi's ^^
Wolf Dancer
01:23:24 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Wow! I'm impressed that S was able to come up to a E!
Ivory Coast
01:22:09 
-HEE Click- You're cutee.
AP Legacy
01:18:16 ✨ Sassy
No problems! Hope she throws you something shiny <33
Ivory Coast
01:17:46 
Sassy
I got one, thank you though <3
AP Legacy
01:16:31 ✨ Sassy
I can send you a atraw from my former AALB stallion for free, I just don't know how to change the breeding requirements ):
Ivory Coast
01:11:56 
Riverchase
Thank you, just can't find a WWW stallion with the right minimum breeding rating.
Riverchase Castle
01:10:12 
Ooo, i love the rabicano
Ivory Coast
12:58:41 
That made up for a horrid capture day.
Ivory Coast
12:58:26 
Holy Crap. -HEE Click-
Ivory Coast
12:49:18 
-HEE Click- It's gonna take me so much self control to not keep you.

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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

Thanks

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