| Nolified |
| Gypsy, it says 'at' in my textbook instead of in so I have to keep it that way or it will be wrong.. i'm only supposed to change the action verb |
Moderate Temperatures and Overcast| Nolified |
| Gypsy, it says 'at' in my textbook instead of in so I have to keep it that way or it will be wrong.. i'm only supposed to change the action verb |
| Willow Grove |
| Hazard The mental images for those are pretty different lol. What are you trying to convey? A normal, calm morning or something more rushed? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Hazard I like the way the second one is rewritten. It puts kind of a silly image of a sinister guy chugging his drink in my mind lol |
| Gypsy Family Farm |
| Hazard, The man in black IN the corner of the room chugged his coffee." flows better. |
| Nolified |
| Yall, I need opinions on this sentence. It was formally "The man in black at the corner of the room drank his coffee." And i'm planning on rewording it to, "The man in black at the corner of the room chugged his coffee." What do yall think? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Stella I'm so sorry. It will be okay, hopefully your day gets at least a tad better.🫂 |
| Willow Grove |
| Stella Horrible way to have to spend a birthday, im very sorry for your loss. Munn Interesting |
| Willow Grove |
| Glacier Wish I knew lol. I simply couldnt and was stranded without melatonin |
| Munchkin Stables |
| I've read, that a persons body chemistry changes every 10 years or so. Which would explain allergies coming and going I suppose. |
| BlackRose |
| It’s my birthday today and I have to celebrate it and spend my birthday money putting one of my guinea pigs down |
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| Nolified |
| Gypsy, it says 'at' in my textbook instead of in so I have to keep it that way or it will be wrong.. i'm only supposed to change the action verb |
| Willow Grove |
| Hazard The mental images for those are pretty different lol. What are you trying to convey? A normal, calm morning or something more rushed? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Hazard I like the way the second one is rewritten. It puts kind of a silly image of a sinister guy chugging his drink in my mind lol |
| Gypsy Family Farm |
| Hazard, The man in black IN the corner of the room chugged his coffee." flows better. |
| Nolified |
| Yall, I need opinions on this sentence. It was formally "The man in black at the corner of the room drank his coffee." And i'm planning on rewording it to, "The man in black at the corner of the room chugged his coffee." What do yall think? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Stella I'm so sorry. It will be okay, hopefully your day gets at least a tad better.🫂 |
| Willow Grove |
| Stella Horrible way to have to spend a birthday, im very sorry for your loss. Munn Interesting |
| Willow Grove |
| Glacier Wish I knew lol. I simply couldnt and was stranded without melatonin |
| Munchkin Stables |
| I've read, that a persons body chemistry changes every 10 years or so. Which would explain allergies coming and going I suppose. |
| BlackRose |
| It’s my birthday today and I have to celebrate it and spend my birthday money putting one of my guinea pigs down |
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