| Willow Grove |
| Hazard Maybe "sips" could work better? Feels a bit more reasonable |
Moderate Temperatures and Overcast| Willow Grove |
| Hazard Maybe "sips" could work better? Feels a bit more reasonable |
| Alsike Equestrian |
| I drink normally I would say, enjoying the warmt and taste. I do the same with my best friend espresso <3 |
| Nolified |
| Gypsy, it says 'at' in my textbook instead of in so I have to keep it that way or it will be wrong.. i'm only supposed to change the action verb |
| Willow Grove |
| Hazard The mental images for those are pretty different lol. What are you trying to convey? A normal, calm morning or something more rushed? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Hazard I like the way the second one is rewritten. It puts kind of a silly image of a sinister guy chugging his drink in my mind lol |
| Gypsy Family Farm |
| Hazard, The man in black IN the corner of the room chugged his coffee." flows better. |
| Nolified |
| Yall, I need opinions on this sentence. It was formally "The man in black at the corner of the room drank his coffee." And i'm planning on rewording it to, "The man in black at the corner of the room chugged his coffee." What do yall think? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Stella I'm so sorry. It will be okay, hopefully your day gets at least a tad better.🫂 |
| Willow Grove |
| Stella Horrible way to have to spend a birthday, im very sorry for your loss. Munn Interesting |
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| Willow Grove |
| Hazard Maybe "sips" could work better? Feels a bit more reasonable |
| Alsike Equestrian |
| I drink normally I would say, enjoying the warmt and taste. I do the same with my best friend espresso <3 |
| Nolified |
| Gypsy, it says 'at' in my textbook instead of in so I have to keep it that way or it will be wrong.. i'm only supposed to change the action verb |
| Willow Grove |
| Hazard The mental images for those are pretty different lol. What are you trying to convey? A normal, calm morning or something more rushed? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Hazard I like the way the second one is rewritten. It puts kind of a silly image of a sinister guy chugging his drink in my mind lol |
| Gypsy Family Farm |
| Hazard, The man in black IN the corner of the room chugged his coffee." flows better. |
| Nolified |
| Yall, I need opinions on this sentence. It was formally "The man in black at the corner of the room drank his coffee." And i'm planning on rewording it to, "The man in black at the corner of the room chugged his coffee." What do yall think? |
| Glowing Pines |
| Stella I'm so sorry. It will be okay, hopefully your day gets at least a tad better.🫂 |
| Willow Grove |
| Stella Horrible way to have to spend a birthday, im very sorry for your loss. Munn Interesting |
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