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ADJ Art And Breeding
10:14:28 
thanks!
ADJ Art And Breeding
10:14:21 
ah, so i spent over 20k breeding and stuff trying to get it- xD
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:31 Witchypoo
Ala - nope , lace is a random thing
Guard Horseman Gang
10:08:24 Chaos, GHG
It consists of, Naming, gene testing, bravery testing, being assigned a rider, and training if applicable to kick off tracking
Guard Horseman Gang
10:07:05 Chaos, GHG
I have a little process I go through with my EWW+ horses that I call my onboarding process
Sunlit Meadows Farm
10:06:00 Ala/Alainna
Is lace able to be bred to get a foal with it?
SandWitch Arabians
10:04:45 Witchypoo
boarding ?
Guard Horseman Gang
09:59:36 Chaos, GHG
Finally finished his on boarding
-HEE Click-
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:58:47 Ala/Alainna
her foal was her twin-
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:57:29 Ala/Alainna
-HEE Click- Color bomb? xD
Pink Cocoa
09:56:10 Pinky 🎀
alrighty
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:55:44 Ala/Alainna
Purpleee!
Rosemary Meadows
09:55:40 Millie
Pastel purple!
Guard Horseman Gang
09:55:18 Chaos, GHG
Pastel purple
Calela Eventing
09:55:15 Cali
Pastel purple
Pink Cocoa
09:54:01 Pinky 🎀
No context.
Bright Yellow or Pastel purple?
Guard Horseman Gang
09:52:41 Chaos, GHG
Is this ok
-HEE Click-
Motonemi
09:41:24 AL, mum to Nemi
Just call it incomplete tracking and then go week 12-13 and so on
Motonemi
09:39:00 AL, mum to Nemi
No, no. Write down as is. Weeks = training sessions
Guard Horseman Gang
09:36:51 Chaos, GHG
Or put this week as baseline like this is where we are and the next training would be week 1

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ADJ Art And Breeding
10:14:28 
thanks!
ADJ Art And Breeding
10:14:21 
ah, so i spent over 20k breeding and stuff trying to get it- xD
SandWitch Arabians
10:13:31 Witchypoo
Ala - nope , lace is a random thing
Guard Horseman Gang
10:08:24 Chaos, GHG
It consists of, Naming, gene testing, bravery testing, being assigned a rider, and training if applicable to kick off tracking
Guard Horseman Gang
10:07:05 Chaos, GHG
I have a little process I go through with my EWW+ horses that I call my onboarding process
Sunlit Meadows Farm
10:06:00 Ala/Alainna
Is lace able to be bred to get a foal with it?
SandWitch Arabians
10:04:45 Witchypoo
boarding ?
Guard Horseman Gang
09:59:36 Chaos, GHG
Finally finished his on boarding
-HEE Click-
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:58:47 Ala/Alainna
her foal was her twin-
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:57:29 Ala/Alainna
-HEE Click- Color bomb? xD
Pink Cocoa
09:56:10 Pinky 🎀
alrighty
Sunlit Meadows Farm
09:55:44 Ala/Alainna
Purpleee!
Rosemary Meadows
09:55:40 Millie
Pastel purple!
Guard Horseman Gang
09:55:18 Chaos, GHG
Pastel purple
Calela Eventing
09:55:15 Cali
Pastel purple
Pink Cocoa
09:54:01 Pinky 🎀
No context.
Bright Yellow or Pastel purple?
Guard Horseman Gang
09:52:41 Chaos, GHG
Is this ok
-HEE Click-
Motonemi
09:41:24 AL, mum to Nemi
Just call it incomplete tracking and then go week 12-13 and so on
Motonemi
09:39:00 AL, mum to Nemi
No, no. Write down as is. Weeks = training sessions
Guard Horseman Gang
09:36:51 Chaos, GHG
Or put this week as baseline like this is where we are and the next training would be week 1

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than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.






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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor
Caals Writing a Book! July 28, 2026 01:06 AM


Caaldir Equestrian
 
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We are bringing this back!! The official title and first chapter are below :)

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