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ArcticLights
09:25:01 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh I see. Hopefully it will be fine :)
The Old Gods
09:23:11 Void Malign
Hopefully. I think a lot of it is that the other two cat trees are still at the other house, but it's just been too hot to move them
ArcticLights
09:21:23 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Pup will calm down eventually?
The Old Gods
09:20:12 Void Malign
Pup is being territorial towards Socks and chasing her, but everyone likes the room
ArcticLights
09:19:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL
How are the cats liking new space?
Insignia Elites
09:19:03 Em
Wrong link - -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
09:18:51 Em
-HEE Click-

This couldn't work for the quest D:
The Old Gods
09:17:22 Void Malign
I'd prefer them not to be up there lol. Only reason they can get up there is because of the microwave, which will get moved once the stand arrives
ArcticLights
09:14:35 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Eury, is that good or bad?
Alpine Acres
09:14:30 Lily
True, Al
Also not having wk4 and such tracked makes him difficult to match if you do want to make the effort
The Old Gods
09:13:39 Void Malign
walked into the living room and a second cat has learned how to get up on the shelf above the stove
ArcticLights
09:13:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
But its also this dilemma: if he isnt good, why spending money getting mares
Alpine Acres
09:11:11 Lily
GHG
He was bred mostly to EWE combo mares this year. Like Munn said he would probably do better with stronger mares as he will just keep producing average if he's only bred to EWE
ArcticLights
09:11:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
But if he doesnt do better next month...
ArcticLights
09:10:40 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He has one www so in theory he could produce more
ArcticLights
09:09:51 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Send him to some matching wee mares and see what you get
Guard Horseman Gang
09:09:27 Chaos, GHG
That's what I am curios about I think I had purchased a horse f4om that breeder before and ended up doing better with better mares. I am going to retrack the training as well so hopefully that will give insight
Munchkin Stables
09:07:55 Munn - PONs
It's really hard to say, as only 2 weeks of his training were tracked.
Not impressed by his foals either, as most rated EEE.
However, he could do ok with really good mares.
Guard Horseman Gang
09:07:21 Chaos, GHG
I know he was bred mostly to EEE mares so I'm wondering if breeding him to EWE mares next year will produce better results
Mythological
09:07:02 RIP-Tim:2016-26
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ArcticLights
09:25:01 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Oh I see. Hopefully it will be fine :)
The Old Gods
09:23:11 Void Malign
Hopefully. I think a lot of it is that the other two cat trees are still at the other house, but it's just been too hot to move them
ArcticLights
09:21:23 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Pup will calm down eventually?
The Old Gods
09:20:12 Void Malign
Pup is being territorial towards Socks and chasing her, but everyone likes the room
ArcticLights
09:19:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL
How are the cats liking new space?
Insignia Elites
09:19:03 Em
Wrong link - -HEE Click-
Insignia Elites
09:18:51 Em
-HEE Click-

This couldn't work for the quest D:
The Old Gods
09:17:22 Void Malign
I'd prefer them not to be up there lol. Only reason they can get up there is because of the microwave, which will get moved once the stand arrives
ArcticLights
09:14:35 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Eury, is that good or bad?
Alpine Acres
09:14:30 Lily
True, Al
Also not having wk4 and such tracked makes him difficult to match if you do want to make the effort
The Old Gods
09:13:39 Void Malign
walked into the living room and a second cat has learned how to get up on the shelf above the stove
ArcticLights
09:13:08 Ceci / (Call me) AL
But its also this dilemma: if he isnt good, why spending money getting mares
Alpine Acres
09:11:11 Lily
GHG
He was bred mostly to EWE combo mares this year. Like Munn said he would probably do better with stronger mares as he will just keep producing average if he's only bred to EWE
ArcticLights
09:11:05 Ceci / (Call me) AL
But if he doesnt do better next month...
ArcticLights
09:10:40 Ceci / (Call me) AL
He has one www so in theory he could produce more
ArcticLights
09:09:51 Ceci / (Call me) AL
Send him to some matching wee mares and see what you get
Guard Horseman Gang
09:09:27 Chaos, GHG
That's what I am curios about I think I had purchased a horse f4om that breeder before and ended up doing better with better mares. I am going to retrack the training as well so hopefully that will give insight
Munchkin Stables
09:07:55 Munn - PONs
It's really hard to say, as only 2 weeks of his training were tracked.
Not impressed by his foals either, as most rated EEE.
However, he could do ok with really good mares.
Guard Horseman Gang
09:07:21 Chaos, GHG
I know he was bred mostly to EEE mares so I'm wondering if breeding him to EWE mares next year will produce better results
Mythological
09:07:02 RIP-Tim:2016-26
-HEE Click-

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Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:05 PM


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An update! The past few months have been super busy, so I haven't made much progress. Instead, I've been really honing in the first few chapters until I am satisfied, with the amazing help of a group on Discord which is just writers and authors! There is now a new version (linked in the original post) and I would love the feedback compared to the original!
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:35 PM


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You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.
Caals Writing a Book! October 7, 2024 12:39 PM


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WildWillow said:
You're doing a great job and it is awesome that you found a community of authors & writers to discuss with!
My main advice is to just keep writing. The finished books you see on a shelf had a first draft that was nowhere near the final product - speaking from experience. ;)
Don't stress too much about getting things right. As long as you have the bones of the story in place, you are good.
First drafts are always messy, a little crazy, and very flawed. But getting to the end lets you see your project in whole - the full course of character arcs, story lines, themes, etc. The things that need fixing, the bumps in the flow, the scenes that need rewritten, will jump out at you on the read-through.


For sure! Personally, I think if I can tweak the first few chapters to be good, then the rest of it will follow so I have a base to go by. Thank you! I'll definitely follow that advice! (EDIT: Side account)

Edited at October 7, 2024 12:39 PM by Thornwood Manor
Caals Writing a Book! July 28, 2026 01:06 AM


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We are bringing this back!! The official title and first chapter are below :)

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