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Could I get some pointers on this piece? It just looks a little off to me. I tried doing a ghost horse, have never made one before.
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Need critique on this. Ignore the horrible quality, its the process of uploading it and compressing it as such. Edited at July 9, 2020 07:07 AM by Gaia Farms
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Edited at July 8, 2020 11:23 AM by Gaia Farms
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I added more shadows and fixed the ear as well as added the credits XD Edited at July 9, 2020 12:53 PM by CatÂ’s Eye
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Cats Eye said:  I need critique please :)
I really like this piece alot. As far as improvement goes, the cut out looks a little sloppy by the left ear. I would also maybe add a bit more strategic shadowing to the left (our left) side of the horse in order to contrast the horse a bit more to match the sky. It would bring up the moodiness of the piece as well. You did excellent with the water splashes.
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Jellos Warmbloods said: Cat’s Eye said:  I need critique please :)
I really like this piece alot. As far as improvement goes, the cut out looks a little sloppy by the left ear. I would also maybe add a bit more strategic shadowing to the left (our left) side of the horse in order to contrast the horse a bit more to match the sky. It would bring up the moodiness of the piece as well. You did excellent with the water splashes.
Thank you!
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Edited at July 10, 2020 03:22 PM by Viridian Meadows
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I'm struggling a bit with the lighting in this piece. Mind helping a girl out??
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@Breezie The pattern turned out so wel!!!! Lighting; make the horse as dark as it would be without a light source in this image. Then, use Overlay to draw trace where the light actually is. Play with different brushes for the opacity you want. Definitely reccomend Gaussian Blur if needed <3
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