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03:27:33 Geek, Eek

All I can say is, I'm losing my damn patience. His parents take hour long showers, leaving me with a screaming child, even before he was teething. It's getting on my last fucking nerve. I barely sleep and I'm stressed enough as it is, and this isn't helping.

03:26:01 Geek, Eek

Athena

Will do.

03:22:17 Athena - AAs

Geek
He can suck on banana bread at 4 months. We all did and we're fine lol
Hand him the baby, say than you come up with something and walk away. I don't know

03:20:34 Athena - AAs

You just have to watch for when it gets too small of chunk and gets to be a choking hazard than you toss it and get a new one. And because my mom doesnt put alot of sugar in her banana bread, they were relatively healthy too.

03:20:17 Geek, Eek

Athena

He's four months old. That, and my sister's fiancee would be like, "No, that's not safe. We're not doing that."

Minerva

03:20:07 Min

-HEE Click-

This guy's training is a bit of a fecking rollercoaster xD

03:19:13 Athena - AAs

Geek
Dried out banana bread. My mom would make a batch of banana bread and instead of putting it in loaf pans she poured it into a 9x13 pan and baked it. Than shed take it out, cut it into bars easy for a toddler to hold but too big to choke on and than shed let them dry out. Or freezer them works too. It helped all 6 of my yoounger siblings and me too I'm sure. They'd fall asleep holding a slobbery bar of dried banana bread lol

03:15:51 Geek, Eek

And this is why I don't want kids. -_- I feel bad for him, he's in pain, but yet, I can't do it all by myself.

Silver Stirrup

03:15:44

Question (hypothetically) hope it’s allowed. To test a WWW freshman stud would you offer testing straws to people and regular breedings?

03:13:30

Poor baby

03:13:18 Geek, Eek

He's teething. He was just changed, and just fed. He's not colicky, just fighting sleep.

Minerva

03:12:51 Min

Oh shit, I couldn't imagine anything worse Geek

03:12:33

Teething? Colicky, diaper? Hungry?

03:11:35 Geek, Eek

My nephew is screaming and crying. I've given him his binky, rocked him, everything. And yet, my sister and her fiancee are showering, leaving me with said child. -_-

03:06:53 Athena - AAs

Naw y'all are just lucky. I'm still getting PPPs and PPS combos lol

Minerva

03:06:45 Min

Flinched a little at first but no dramatics and quickly decided he didn't give a fuck! I was nearly in tears he was so good lol

Bluebonnet Estates

03:06:40 Blue ~ Poodle Rat

Peggy
I know lol, I'm just shocked my total crap KNN that have never produced well in their lives are throwing WEE today lol

Pegasus Lane

03:05:53 Peggy (or) Peg

There was a change to breeding, Blue!

Wolf Dancer

03:05:37 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Blue same I can't complete my PPP quest lol PPP x EEE stud and I'm only getting EEP/EPP lol

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Pegasus Lane

03:34:18 Peggy (or) Peg

Ah the rumble is up! Im so excited

03:27:33 Geek, Eek

03:26:01 Geek, Eek

Athena

Will do.

03:22:17 Athena - AAs

Geek
He can suck on banana bread at 4 months. We all did and we're fine lol
Hand him the baby, say than you come up with something and walk away. I don't know

03:20:34 Athena - AAs

03:20:17 Geek, Eek

Athena

He's four months old. That, and my sister's fiancee would be like, "No, that's not safe. We're not doing that."

Minerva

03:20:07 Min

-HEE Click-

This guy's training is a bit of a fecking rollercoaster xD

03:19:13 Athena - AAs

03:15:51 Geek, Eek

And this is why I don't want kids. -_- I feel bad for him, he's in pain, but yet, I can't do it all by myself.

Silver Stirrup

03:15:44

Question (hypothetically) hope it’s allowed. To test a WWW freshman stud would you offer testing straws to people and regular breedings?

03:13:30

Poor baby

03:13:18 Geek, Eek

He's teething. He was just changed, and just fed. He's not colicky, just fighting sleep.

Minerva

03:12:51 Min

Oh shit, I couldn't imagine anything worse Geek

03:12:33

Teething? Colicky, diaper? Hungry?

03:11:35 Geek, Eek

My nephew is screaming and crying. I've given him his binky, rocked him, everything. And yet, my sister and her fiancee are showering, leaving me with said child. -_-

03:06:53 Athena - AAs

Naw y'all are just lucky. I'm still getting PPPs and PPS combos lol

Minerva

03:06:45 Min

Flinched a little at first but no dramatics and quickly decided he didn't give a fuck! I was nearly in tears he was so good lol

Bluebonnet Estates

03:06:40 Blue ~ Poodle Rat

Peggy
I know lol, I'm just shocked my total crap KNN that have never produced well in their lives are throwing WEE today lol

Pegasus Lane

03:05:53 Peggy (or) Peg

There was a change to breeding, Blue!

Wolf Dancer

03:05:37 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Blue same I can't complete my PPP quest lol PPP x EEE stud and I'm only getting EEP/EPP lol

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October 13, 2019 11:13 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

Posts: 7336
#465295
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Joe the horse doesn't match the baclground

There are plenty of tutorials on deviant art to help you but from what I'm able to do-

Duplicate the background layer, put it on a clipping mask to the horse layer and blur so its just blobs of colour, then switch this layer to one of the following

Soft.light

Overlay

Colour

Then mess with the opacity. If it still looks a little out of place dupliactae the horse layer so you have backup then bead with brightness and contrast and/or colour change

October 13, 2019 11:23 AM

Lambo Farms

Posts: 712
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https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg

thoughts on this?

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:44 AM by Lambo Farms

October 13, 2019 11:47 AM

Former Stable

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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this?

That is gorgeous!! I love the mane and the background choice is beautiful. The only thing I can see is the hooves are obviously blurred. Try making it seem like they're under the water by playing with the different colors and brushes.

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:48 AM by White Forest Farms

October 13, 2019 11:50 AM

Trillium Acres

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Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/jj7CCRB9/Untitled375-1.jpg
thoughts on this? I have not finished the tail yet.

Hey!

To start off, the hooves are very blurry. Try finding some water splash stock and putting over the hooves (adjust the opacity of the splash layer if it looks funny).

Next... The horse doesn't really match the background. They are two different lightings- Warm and cool[er] (The horse is warm and the background is too cool for it to look realistic with the horse.) If you dont want to replace the background, I would play around with hues and balance on the horse and bg. You could also blur the bg a little if you want to draw more attention to the horse.

The mane and tail look fine, but I would add some shadows and a [few] harsh highlights (with the layer set to overlay). Apply the highlights all over the body\wherever you want the viewer to focus.

One last thing... The credits are a bit hard to read due to the trees in the background. Maybe try moving the credits to the bottom or another place where they are more visible :P

Hope this makes sense and helps :D

Edited at October 13, 2019 11:51 AM by Trillium Acres

October 13, 2019 11:51 AM

Sunset Grove Farm

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This peice is great

Some pointers

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction

-as stated ahive the hooves are blurred, when it comes to situations like these the hooves would be covered by water but not completely

~to do this dupliactate the horse layer, erase some of the hooves on one layer and lower the opacity of the other layer

-try blurring some of the bg to add more focus to the subject [the horse]

-the horse would have more green and cyan hues, try messing around with the colour change option

For the tailill do a quick red pen for the image now

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?

October 13, 2019 11:54 AM

Trillium Acres

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Sunset Grove Farm said:

-the tail wouldn't be so thick and straight, try adding some curve near the bottom in the opposite direction

I agree with Sunset on this. I hadn't even thought about it lol!

Thank you for making a red pen :)

October 13, 2019 12:30 PM

Sunset Grove Farm

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https://i.postimg.cc/HLkTdZtk/Untitled291.png

Here ya are

Lambo Farms said:
https://i.postimg.cc/W3nDPTDk/Untitled375-2.jpg
thoughts on this?

October 13, 2019 05:02 PM

Caprina Springs

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https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg

i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<

Edited at October 13, 2019 05:03 PM by Captain Marvel

October 13, 2019 05:09 PM

Lambo Farms

Posts: 712
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Captain Marvel said:
https://i.postimg.cc/pdPD8mQ4/bbbb3-2.jpg
i would love to hear thoughts on this! I did this in about roughly 2-3 days :/ and i havent properly resized it yet so the quality isnt the best >.<

I would say to blend the feet in the ground and the end of the tail spreads kinda of funny.