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White Hills, Overall that's really nice! Composition, lighting, body prep and cutting is all really well done. The background could be saturated a tiny bit but other wise it's pretty damn good! I think the main thing you need to work on a bit is the hair. The mane seems like a bit of a block and the tail seems very fluffy. I think it needs a bit more shadows through it to give it more shape. Well done though, looks amazing!
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Did this one super late last night while waiting for Sheila to foal so I know it probably needs some help. Any critique is welcome!
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Please click for quality. Unfortunately trying to make this small enough for HEE made it a little fuzzy but.. We'll just ignore that >u<
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First think is,the eyes need to be more visible,even though it is a dark piece.The eyes dont have to be bright,but it looks like the are no eyes.Second,horse hair is wiry,but the mane looks a little fluffy especially because it comes to a joined point,the way i fix this is by making the ends a bit longer and NOT touching. The composition of this pixe is verry nice,abd is apealing in every way.The hair has very good sgading and yhe body prey is nice.the face looks nicely lowlighted and highlighted,so the muscles are clear.The backgrounf looks very nice with the horse Well done mish,its very nice
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Im specifically looking for critique on BODY PREP ONLY,and how to improve,how to make the horse looks shinier ect Click and zoom for detail
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It looks like you used a small brush and smudged it. You want it to look completely smooth and natural. I recommend that rather than using a small brush use a 20-50 px airbrush on 10-20% opacity. Make sure you smudge in line with the muscles rather than the fur.
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Gem said: It looks like you used a small brush and smudged it. You want it to look completely smooth and natural. I recommend that rather than using a small brush use a 20-50 px airbrush on 10-20% opacity. Make sure you smudge in line with the muscles rather than the fur.
I was intending for it to look sketchy and painted, that's why I followed fur instead of muscle like usual
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Ok, if that's what you were going for then it looks very nice :)
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i love the look of that style
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Looking for some critique on this custom I did ;) Edited at May 2, 2020 05:15 PM by Gem
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