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Campbell Equestrian

11:51:24 Hails

ISO: rerolls 180k for a set of 20. Pm me :)

11:26:07 Ly/Lyra

Foal Sale!
PON & SH 200ebs - rare colors ranging from PEE-Unrated

unbred wild mares 900
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10:28:37 Vecc - TBs

Many new items added to my shop.
All are now 1/2 price !!
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Blossom Eventing

10:25:26 #blossomsuccess

The Auction you don't want to miss>
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Restarting my programs and selling some nice horses.
EEE+ Mares RID, AA & WB. EWW RID Stallion

Riverchase Castle

10:13:37 RC

Iso Upgrade

10:13:21 Will Buy Brindles!!

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Need these EWE-EWW color AA mares gone today! Will accept almost any offer pm me!

10:02:23

W Mares!!! I need Gone!!!
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Campbell Equestrian

09:31:05 Hails

ISO: rerolls! Paying 175k for a set of 20! Pm me!

Port Royal Equines

09:11:39 ISO Brave EWW ISH

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Elephant Walk Stable

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Campbell Equestrian

11:51:24 Hails

ISO: rerolls 180k for a set of 20. Pm me :)

11:26:07 Ly/Lyra

Foal Sale!
PON & SH 200ebs - rare colors ranging from PEE-Unrated

unbred wild mares 900
-HEE Click-

10:28:37 Vecc - TBs

Many new items added to my shop.
All are now 1/2 price !!
-HEE Click-

Blossom Eventing

10:25:26 #blossomsuccess

The Auction you don't want to miss>
> -HEE Click-
Restarting my programs and selling some nice horses.
EEE+ Mares RID, AA & WB. EWW RID Stallion

Riverchase Castle

10:13:37 RC

Iso Upgrade

10:13:21 Will Buy Brindles!!

-HEE Click-
Need these EWE-EWW color AA mares gone today! Will accept almost any offer pm me!

10:02:23

W Mares!!! I need Gone!!!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

Campbell Equestrian

09:31:05 Hails

ISO: rerolls! Paying 175k for a set of 20! Pm me!

Port Royal Equines

09:11:39 ISO Brave EWW ISH

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
I have a couple broods left! Anyone interested?

Elephant Walk Stable

09:06:16 Chey

race, anyone

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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